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> I wrote a song., I don't know what to call it yet.
Rebecca
post Jul 15 2011, 03:06 AM
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Is there a place where I belong?
I guess not, because I'm writing this song.
One place is not enough for a person like me.
Maybe there is, in another reality.

Is there a world where I fit in?
A place where a brand new life can begin?
There could never be, just one me.
There'd have to be,
maybe five or six or two hundred and three

Is it just that I'm not black and white
In a world that thinks that it's only right?
A world where I can be who I want to, but not really?
In this world, to be what you want
You need everything you've got
And then some,
Maybe this world just isn't cut out for me.

They say that, life can't get any better
But I say that, this world has got so much more to offer
If only we could look past our eyes
And see the horizon past the skies

Listen, to the sounds of
Everyone that's on the ground
Hear the mindless chatter
Ignore it, it doesn't matter

Is it just that I'm not black and white
In a world that thinks that it's only right?
A world where I can be who I want to, but not really?
In this world, to be what you want
You need everything you've got
And then some,
Maybe this world just isn't cut out for me.

Maybe writing from the heart
Even from the start it's just
Not enough to make a life
Living what you love?

Is it just too much to
Ask for a chance to be great
At the thing I'm best at?
At the thing I dream to be?

Is it just that I'm not black and white
In a world that thinks that that's only right?
A world where I can be who I want to, but not really?
In this world, to be what you want
You need everything you've got
And then some,
Maybe this world just isn't cut out for me.

Is there a world where I fit in?
A place where a brand new life can begin?
There could never be, just one me.
There'd have to be,
maybe five or six or two hundred and three






Maybe in a while (when I remember to charge my camera's batteries) I'll record me playing it on the piano, maybe even singing it.
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Noviwan
post Jul 15 2011, 09:14 PM
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I like it until my brain took over and added guitars
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Noviwan
post Jul 16 2011, 10:45 AM
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Charge thine camera and play the tune please my brain keeps jacking the rhythm!
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Rebecca
post Jul 16 2011, 01:31 PM
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(IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Okay, but it takes like three or eight hours to charge the batteries. *I forgot which number it was* And.... I'm also tired right now, and I have to actually figure out how I want it to sound.
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Noviwan
post Jul 16 2011, 02:58 PM
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Okay I await record maybe I can learns it on guitars!?
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Rebecca
post Jul 16 2011, 03:06 PM
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Uhhh... Sure... Good news though, I now have the basic melody down.... though I haven't settled on a note pattern for the chorus...... *ADHD + Song = different notes per chorus unless I absolutely love the one I did then enough to remember it*
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Noviwan
post Jul 16 2011, 03:23 PM
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yeah the rhythm trips me up from verse to chorus
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Rebecca
post Jul 16 2011, 03:43 PM
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I'm currently fiddling around with my camera and how much it apparently hates instruments and singing at the same time.... As soon as I figure that much out, I'll be able to mesh it together and hopefully post it (assuming it doesn't take as long to load on my computer as the last one I made did)
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Noviwan
post Jul 16 2011, 03:45 PM
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wheres the last one?
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Rebecca
post Jul 16 2011, 03:47 PM
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It's on Youtube. It's just a mash up of my Sophomore Year of high school to the tune of "When the Saints go Marching in." I was going to upload it straight to Facebook, but that was being slower than my computer, and it always froze.

EDIT: I think I figured out that I'm going to have to record the piano and my singing separately. It doesn't sound right with out the piano. I really don't like the sound of myself without at least one instrument behind it. I guess I'll have to record the piano first so I can listen to it as I record the singing.
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