Abstracted, My manga ^-^ |
Abstracted, My manga ^-^ |
Apr 4 2009, 09:58 AM
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor Joined: 16-July 08 |
(IMG:http://i525.photobucket.com/albums/cc331/princess_of_melody/Graphics/Abstracted.jpg) Made by me Abstracted is a comic about 5 girls who attend a school called Karison high school. They go through ordeals such as a lazy-butt teacher who has a grudge against one of her top students, wars between Yr7 students and Yr 8 students, a guy named Derek who has a major lame crush on a perfection-obsessed girl, a tall blonde who manages to squeeze an average mark in class, a big-haired Aussie who is just trying to let go of the past, a cute little girl who is trying to kiss the boy of her dreams and a funky girl who's got a big bust. (IMG:http://i525.photobucket.com/albums/cc331/princess_of_melody/Graphics/Characters.jpg) Made by me Erisu "Errie" Karusaki 13 Being a smart child for her age, Erisu skipped Yr 3, and now is in Yr 8 at the age of 13. Erisu is a fast worker and a great student, although, she dislikes the idea of school entirely and would prefer to stay at home, but, how would that get her anywhere in life? Erisu "Lives" With her parents Kaguma and Jiisu. Nalia Davidson 14 A bookworm who can have a few blonde moments, and can easily get distracted. She is a slow worker at school and gets low grades. The only class she enjoys is DAT and reading lessons. Nalia moved from Scottland at age seven with her mum Malsa, dad, Adarek and 15 year old brother Calson. Nalia's family also owns a cat named Dawn. Sarika Lara 14 An average student at Karison highschool, Sarika enjoys school. Sarika is a mood-swinger who will turn from shy and sweet to a boy to an outrageous bully. Sarika cares for her younger brother Tororo, and her parents Jolan and Tasikai. Maiya Scolnick 12 A short student who fails at sport. This girl-in-buns is a superstitious-cry baby who doesn't like the colour red. Maiya can change from tears to smiles instantly when she sees her love Noah. Maiya lives with her twin sister, Freyja and 18 year old brother Tom. They don't get to go out of the boundaries because of their strict over-protective parents Saskia and John. They have a pet chihuahua Lucky and cat Ellie. Chrisy Kents 14 Chrisy obeys the class rules and does well at school. Chrisy is outgoing, flirty, a pinch full of herself and is easily jealous of. Still, she's a popular student at the school and is constantly chased by guys. But her boyfriend is Mat in year twelve. Chrisy is a cousin of Sarika, and since her parents are having trouble at home she's come over to stay for a while again. She pokes fun at Sarika and is easily bugged by her being such a "Boy". Other characters Derek Pekowski A full-of-himself guy who normally gets in detention for talking in class too much. But when he gets over himself he can seem shy and not quite a bad guy. But that will take a while for Erisu to see, along with getting over his bad hair. Hannah Ethengown The kids favourite teachers, not Erisu's though. Ms. Ethengown is a nightmare for Erisu. She could get her on a weekly detention for answering a question. AnnaBelle McIntosh One of Maiya's friends. She prefers to figure things out maturely than Maiya's crazy end-of-the-world way. She sometimes hangs out with Maiya when there sitting altogether in the "Awesometastical and Mega-Awesome Area of Quietness". Noah Bridge Noah is Maiya's unfortunate crush. His cool, nice and collected but feels awkward by Maiya's strange behaviour when he's near her. Oscar Murray Oscar, in year eight, takes his time to work at the library and see Nalia borrowing her books. His a kind guy who takes a liking to Nalia and her choice of books. Mat Partridgeman Chrisy's hot boyfriend. Mat is the popular guy.... All the way up to year 12. He enjoys hanging with his friends and showing off his girlfriend. He isn't all about popularity though. These are characters that myself and my friends made up. This comic consists of our ideas being plotted together to create a comedic comic. Manga; Not all the scans are perfect, and I apologise. Don't beat me up. ;__; Chapter 1; 5 Freinds Pg 1 Pg 2 Pg 3 Pg 4 Pg 5 Pg 6 Pg 7 Pg 8 Pg 9 Pg 10 Pg 11 Pg 12 Pg 13 Pg 14 Pg 15 Pg 16 Pg 17 Pg 18 Pg 19 Pg 20 Pg 21 Pg 22 Pg 23 < Bad language Pg 24 Pg 25 Pg 26 Pg 27 Pg 28 Pg 29 Pg 30 Pg 31 Pg 32 Pg 33 Pg 34 Pg 35 Pg 36 Pg 37 Pg 38 Pg 39 Pg 40 Okay, so, please, I beg you. Do not copy these ideas. They are owned by me and my friends and one of their brothers (I suppose). I've put a lot of effort in the pictures (Eh.... Most) and I would be very disappointed to see them copied somewhere else. Otherwise, I hope you have fun reading the comic. |
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Apr 4 2009, 10:01 AM
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Member Group: Veterans Joined: 4-March 07 |
*copies* Mvuahahahahahahahahaha
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Apr 4 2009, 10:10 AM
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor Joined: 16-July 08 |
Oh, thanks Tolby, you warm my heart.
What makes it so funny for me is the movie I was watching just went "Muahahahaha" the same time I read you post XDDD |
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Apr 5 2009, 05:02 AM
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I don't remember selling my soul to you. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-March 09 |
Looks very nice and official. Chalk one up to Charmy.
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Apr 5 2009, 05:59 AM
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor Joined: 16-July 08 |
Hey guys, I'm having trouble uploading my comic to Photobucket. At first the image was a JPEG, but it didn't show up on the list, then I changed it to a PNG, when it starts to load that's all it does, load. Should I try another image-y thing of is their something wrong with it?
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Apr 5 2009, 03:48 PM
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whatever Group: Veterans Joined: 19-December 08 |
Maybe it's just a big file and may take longer to upload. Anyways,nice job Charmy,looking forward to seeing it.
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Apr 5 2009, 05:05 PM
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I don't remember selling my soul to you. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-March 09 |
If your willing to join deviantart. You could put it there easily.
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Apr 5 2009, 09:24 PM
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whatever Group: Veterans Joined: 19-December 08 |
People steal from DevantArt all the time,on photobucket you can lock your album. Anyways you could also use imageshack if photobucket isn't working for 'ya.
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Apr 5 2009, 10:29 PM
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Member Group: Members Joined: 20-July 08 |
I knooow I get s mad when I post something there and then I see it on another site where the person said they made it ughhh
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Apr 6 2009, 06:09 AM
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor Joined: 16-July 08 |
Mm'kay, ImageShack seems to work.... Kinda. This is the best I can do for now, so, sorry for the problems.
EDIT: BTW, since I'm re-doing the speechbubbles, it'll take longer for me to post them up. Like, I only have 5 pages down and I still have about 7 more to do.... |
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Apr 6 2009, 04:27 PM
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Patience, my young grasshopper. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-September 08 |
I LUF your manga, Charmy! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/emot-iia.png) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smilie-iil.gif) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smilie_iim.gif) I thought it looked real nice and your drawings are AWESOME!!!! I wanted to start a manga myself but unfortunately I don't have a scanner and would just be able to take pictures of the pages....
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Apr 6 2009, 07:11 PM
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whatever Group: Veterans Joined: 19-December 08 |
Awww Charmy these are SOOOO AWESOME! The drawings are extremely good and bubbles are fine! Oh and the script is neat and funny. Good job. Can't wait for more. :D
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Apr 6 2009, 07:19 PM
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Patience, my young grasshopper. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-September 08 |
I also thought you did a good job with the humor in this manga. It made me giggle. ^_^
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Apr 7 2009, 05:57 AM
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor Joined: 16-July 08 |
I feel a little less stressed now, glad you liked it ^-^ I still have a bunch of pages, so, check back often.
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Apr 7 2009, 06:12 AM
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I don't remember selling my soul to you. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-March 09 |
Whoas! Sorry I didnt look earlier!
I really liked it! But page four is blank... Maybe its my dsi. Gah! Why is everyone in the world a better artist than me? |
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Apr 7 2009, 06:22 AM
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor Joined: 16-July 08 |
Pg 4 is there, so somethings wrong with you :P
Oh, I swear your not that bad! Also, I'm about to add the fifth character, but not introduce D: I have to check a few more things with my friends before I do. So, some of her profile might be a bit blank. |
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Apr 7 2009, 06:33 AM
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I don't remember selling my soul to you. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-March 09 |
Lol, the first drawing I put effort into is SO embarrasing.
Cant wait to see where this story goes! |
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Apr 7 2009, 08:47 PM
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[[.scg.]] Group: Veterans Joined: 23-March 09 |
Charmy, you are a great artist! And the storyline is awesome, too!
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Apr 7 2009, 11:23 PM
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Patience, my young grasshopper. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-September 08 |
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Apr 9 2009, 07:57 AM
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor Joined: 16-July 08 |
GRR, I speech bubbled 3 pages but when ImageShack is done "Downloading" nothing shows up! UGH, what's happening now?
And thanx for all the compliments! ^-^ |
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