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 Aug 11 2010, 08:33 PM
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An artist of many sorts Group: Veterans Joined: 16-October 09  |
I noticed that, but I mysteriously vanished from then onward. 0.o
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Aug 11 2010, 09:06 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Rebecca: You went to band camp! :D (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fI0ewvz27lI...4iTM&fmt=18 Watch that! I think it'll remind you a lot about Riesgo. Like a lot... And bonus points for anybody that knows what "Riesgo" is/means. |
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Aug 11 2010, 09:09 PM
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Retired Superhero Group: Veterans Joined: 6-September 09 |
According to a spanish translator...err.... I mean based on my knowledge, it means "hazard".
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Aug 11 2010, 09:20 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
:D You got it, ZBoy! Hazard or risk.
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Aug 11 2010, 09:38 PM
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Retired Superhero Group: Veterans Joined: 6-September 09 |
That is very clever Oscar. I think finished fanfics should be stickied to the top of the Fanfic Forum...
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Aug 11 2010, 09:48 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
:D That would be cool! Though I doubt anybody else will read it now. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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Aug 11 2010, 09:51 PM
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Bigger. Better. Toaster. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-March 07 |
If you want it pinned, I'd do it. Molly made me laugh, but anyway, good job.
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Aug 11 2010, 09:54 PM
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Retired Superhero Group: Veterans Joined: 6-September 09 |
I just thought it would keep things organized to show that the pinned stories are completed.
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Aug 11 2010, 10:09 PM
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Bigger. Better. Toaster. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-March 07 |
I guess, but I'd rather just edit it with (COMPELTED!), or something. If it ever gets to the point with a bunch of completed fanfics, it'd become messy.
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Aug 11 2010, 10:45 PM
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Gill's still number 1 Group: Veterans Joined: 29-August 08 |
Coolies, that was an exciting ending.
I like to think that when everyone fell into the earth, they didn't die and actually started a new town, starting your second book. :3 |
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Aug 11 2010, 11:05 PM
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
Um, I think it's missing the part where it turns out Hasfusel was skillfully faking his death by slowing his heart rate with yoga techniques and masterminded the whole thing all along?
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Aug 11 2010, 11:25 PM
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Member Group: Forest Spirit Joined: 13-July 08 |
It was very good. Other then my dieing, and that person, and them, and that guy over there, and every other person in the whole story... But really, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for taking the time to write it for us. =]
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Aug 11 2010, 11:30 PM
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The World Traveller Group: Global Moderators  Joined: 14-June 09 |
QUOTE (Hasfusel @ Aug 11 2010, 06:05 PM)  Um, I think it's missing the part where it turns out Hasfusel was skillfully faking his death by slowing his heart rate with yoga techniques and masterminded the whole thing all along? And the part where Mizuki and Hasfusel were using their "marriage" as a convenient excuse to get into places and things with less suspicion than they would have if they went in as two separate people working together. Also - I would never die from exhaustion like that. Ever. *stopped reading after chapter 10* |
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Aug 12 2010, 12:46 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
TB: Thanks! And thanks for adding "completed". Yeah, Molly. Couldn't find a better name.
Dani: I actually thought people would think that! But yeah, everyone could be underground and Saffy gets remade. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Hasfusel: Hey, you saw your role! You did help out a lot. You got the blueprints. Totoro: Yeah...everyone was dying left and right. I think every chapter after the second one had someone dying...>.> Mizuki: And you read it, too! You and Hasfusel would have been the perfect masterminds. At least you read some of it! |
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Aug 12 2010, 01:52 AM
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I leave you alone for TWO minutes! Group: Veterans Joined: 27-November 08 |
...Is this your way of saying you want us to die, Oscar?
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Aug 12 2010, 01:53 AM
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Retired Superhero Group: Veterans Joined: 6-September 09 |
QUOTE (Zen Clarke @ Aug 11 2010, 08:52 PM) ...Is this your way of saying you want us to die, Oscar? O_O WHAT!? |
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Aug 12 2010, 01:56 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Hahaha! Yes. I want you all to just die! See, if you take out a couple of letters from "Riesgo", it spells out "RS"! I want RS to get swallowed by the earth! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) But wait, I was in it. :O
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Aug 12 2010, 02:25 AM
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Bigger. Better. Toaster. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-March 07 |
Okay, words out of Riesgo? Riesgo is one word itself.
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Aug 12 2010, 02:28 AM
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Retired Superhero Group: Veterans Joined: 6-September 09 |
Or you were really just a robot running on the honeycombs. Your real self was in a space station looknig down and laughing at us!
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Aug 12 2010, 02:45 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
TB: Haha, sorry, meant letters. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) I need to take that title from Totoro...
ZBoy: Yeah, that actually sounds more right. I was in a space station in the moon. That's why I mentioned it often. |
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