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> It's alright, Lucy, it's alright, A song for my beloved.
GustafasChild
post Aug 8 2009, 05:07 AM
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OBJECTION!
Group: Gusty
Joined: 12-March 07


Well actually, I didn't write it, but I helped come up with it :B It started with a conversation, someone misspelled a word, and I said "It's alright, Lucy, it's alright." They were inspired. It sounded like a song title, you see? So I gave them a setting, and they wrote it 8D

It's Alright, Lucy, It's Alright

She loves me, she loves me not
The petals fall, one by one
And I call her on the telephone
But she doesn't wanna talk
Don't yell I say to myself
As she cries and the signal breaks out
I've got to get this together


CHORUS

it's alright lucy, it's alright
don't cry over me, cause I'm not worth it
it's alright lucy, it's alright
don't want it to be, but it's over tonight

I take a walk to clear my head
Of memories of her and things she said
Ten below zero, and I feel her
Screaming in the back of my mind
And I don't want to let her go
I don't want these words to be my last


**CHORUS**

Somebody tell me where did she go
'Cause I want to apologize, I want to hold her
Where'd she go, I'm so lost without you
I'm so sorry, if only you knew


**CHORUS**






It was just a little fun thing for us to do, however, critique, anyone? 8D
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Hasfusel
post Sep 1 2009, 01:58 AM
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Goodnight
Group: Ranch Hand
Joined: 27-March 08


Funky, but you need a bitchin' tune to go with it. Also I misread "breaks" as "breasts".
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