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Mayonaka_Kaji
post Oct 5 2008, 12:32 AM
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I made this a few days ago. I'm putting it on a manga/comic site as well. For now its on photobucket and my deviant art account. I'll change the main picture of the comic each day. ^^
Links of each page will be put up as I continue to upload them.

Please read the notes under each one. I tend to make mistakes and don't realize them till I already fixed them up. Also it is in pencil. ^^;

Summary:

What would happen if you sent a character from IoH to ToT? Well here you'll see one side of the story. Chelsea finds her self moving to Waffle Town after she hears that Akari is marring Shae. This leaves her completely alone with no man in IoH. So what better way to start a new in a whole different set of islands.

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I am taking suggestions for events to happen with Chelsea and the characters in ToT. ^^

Updates:
Oct. 5 - Changed links so they should work.
More pages to come later today. ^^ About up to 6 pages if I have time. Maybe more. ;D
Oct 6 - I have added four more pages. ^^

(IMG:http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f378/Mayonaka_Kaji/bunny001.jpg)


Page 1
Note: Shae's arm is messed up. ^^; Sorry.
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Yes its a talking bunny. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Harvest Goddess from ToT appears. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
Chapter 1
Page 8
Page 9
Page 10
Page 11
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Charmy
post Oct 5 2008, 12:49 AM
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The links don't seem to work.

And the picture hasn't loaded up yet, but, they may be just because the wii's taking FOREVER and getting on my nerves.
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Mayonaka_Kaji
post Oct 5 2008, 07:42 PM
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Thanks for telling me.
I was using links to my deviant so I'm going to use my photobucket instead. ^^

Edit: I have changed the links and made sure they work. ^^ So its all good now.
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Charmy
post Oct 5 2008, 11:35 PM
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Rather nice.

Bit hard to see the pictures though, maybe that's something you can work on :)
Keep it up.
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Mayonaka_Kaji
post Oct 6 2008, 12:26 AM
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Well when I click it the mouse turns into a magnifying glass and if you click it it gets larger.
If that doesn't work for you I may have to go back and make them larger. Or look them up on photobucket by searching TMHM or my user name Mayonaka_Kaji. Even looking up that name on deviant art you might find it. ^^
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post Oct 6 2008, 12:28 AM
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Okay :)

Though, like, can you make the lines darker around the people maybe? So you can see them better? Just a suggestion, maybe I just don't have good sight.
And I love the talking rabbit :)
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Mayonaka_Kaji
post Oct 6 2008, 01:34 AM
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Yea that has been what I have been thinking. The boxes are light because I don't have a ruler to make them straight. I'll darken the people though. I have plenty of time before I scan the rest of them later tonight. ^^

Ah yes. You do find out who the rabbit is actually. I don't plan on showing who it is just yet.
I just had to make something pop up by her. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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post Oct 6 2008, 01:37 AM
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Lozies *Waits impatiently*
*Jumps up and down*
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Mayonaka_Kaji
post Oct 6 2008, 03:46 AM
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Alright. I'll be posting them soon.
I actually tried to ink them in pen and it made them darker and actually better then always seeing them in pencil. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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post Oct 6 2008, 03:56 AM
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Try doing a light sketch in pencil, darken things with pen, then if you want colour it in pencil?
*Gets in comic mood*
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Mayonaka_Kaji
post Oct 6 2008, 05:20 AM
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No colored pencils. ^^;
Anyway I have put four pages in pen.
Hopefully that helps and I like it in pen. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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post Oct 6 2008, 05:28 AM
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=^-^=

Can't wait to see more!!!
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Mayonaka_Kaji
post Oct 8 2008, 08:20 PM
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^^
On another site I'm doing a ToT high school.
It all went by votes from either IoH or ToT.
Then it was either High School, graduates, or College.
High school won.

So I'll put it up here. If your wanting to vote pm me.
Its on another site. ^^
Not sure if I can say or not. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
Anyway the other comic goes by votes so it'll go more slowly than this one.
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post Oct 17 2008, 08:07 PM
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Ahaha! It made me laugh. The tent thing reminded me of Fruits Basket (It's okay if you haven't seen it.).
Now I want to make a comic too. Of course, I'm very lazy so that's not really a good idea. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) I'll come back to read more, so keep up the good work!
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post Oct 17 2008, 09:35 PM
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Awww, I like it! I wanna see what happens!!!

Keep 'em comin!
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post Oct 18 2008, 11:31 AM
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Whoops, I'm late on news.

Heh, that tent things strange.
Hmm.... I want to make a comic....

With Gil speaking it says "Fahter" instead of "Father".
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post Oct 25 2008, 04:58 AM
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Awsome Comic. ^^ Your very good at expressions. *waits for more pages*
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post Oct 25 2008, 01:58 PM
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Now this, is awesome :D
It makes me want to do a comic, and I never do those cuz I suck at drawing (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
(I'll just go back to my writing corner (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalacry.gif) )
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Mayonaka_Kaji
post Oct 28 2008, 12:04 AM
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Thanks guys.
As of right now I have been rather busy. ^^;
Anyway if I made typos...well heh...I didn't notice them.

Also I have been working on another one. It'll be posted once I get my lazy butt up and scanning it. ^^
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post Nov 6 2008, 12:25 AM
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QUOTE (Mayonaka_Kaji @ Oct 27 2008, 05:04 PM) *
Thanks guys.
As of right now I have been rather busy. ^^;
Anyway if I made typos...well heh...I didn't notice them.

Also I have been working on another one. It'll be posted once I get my lazy butt up and scanning it. ^^


It's okay. I understand...

In fact, that's exactly what I'd be saying if I was working on a comic and was behind on updates... (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalatounge.gif) Scanning is a lot of effort... And I'm lazy! Are you my long lost clone? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaeyes.gif)
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