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Louey & Hits...
post May 4 2008, 11:43 AM
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The trickling tears fell from his face and mingled in the pond. Claire's soft features were hardened and grey. Her eyes no longer held the sweet clear blue irises and her hair once silky and smooth was motionless.
His hand slowly moved into the water and touched the lifeless face of his beloved. Gray refused to believe that she was no longer alive.
This can't be true, you can't be dead.
He leant towards her, pulled her to him and embraced the stone figure.
Gray's lips touched the cold pale ones of Claire. As this happened his last tear dropped into the pond and something magically happened.
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post May 4 2008, 05:37 PM
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Claire's stony figure glowed brightly, Grey shielded his eyes. When he opened them, he saw claire floating into his arms, she was waking up, Grey was overjoyed!
"...Grey...." Claire spoke, "Thank you."
"Anything for you..." Grey said. he held her closely.
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post May 4 2008, 05:43 PM
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Claire's stony figure glowed brightly, Grey shielded his eyes. When he opened them, he saw claire floating into his arms, she was waking up, Grey was overjoyed!
"...Grey...." Claire spoke, "Thank you."
"Anything for you..." Grey said. he held her closely.

(Ack! Noo! I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to double post)
(STUPID COMPUTER!!!!)
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post May 4 2008, 06:43 PM
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*not a part of the story*

Wow I have not been here in a while and I'm alittle lost sith this story. And are we going to ever end this story and start a new one? I'll have to go back and reread it to try to understand it more. See ya'll around.
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post May 4 2008, 06:48 PM
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*not a part of the story*

Wow I have not been here in a while and I'm alittle lost with this story. And are we going to ever end this story and start a new one? I'll have to go back and reread it to try to understand it more. See ya'll around.
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Louey & Hits...
post May 5 2008, 08:34 AM
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(I like long stories ^^)
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post May 5 2008, 11:10 AM
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QUOTE (Louey & Hitsu lover @ May 5 2008, 08:34 AM) *
(I like long stories ^^)

Yeah, well I like mittens. This thing is getting way off topic.
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Hasfusel
post May 5 2008, 02:43 PM
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Slowly Mark reawoke as well. Grey's natural magic had revealed itself, healing Claire and Mark!
Meanwhile, the Harvest Goddess awoke - to discover she was tied up with magical rope in the Witch Princess' cottage.

Harvest Goddess: "What is the meaning of this???"

Witch Princess: "I need your help to find my husband. If you don't help me I won't let you free. Simple."

Harvest Goddess: "W-what? No! I'm not allowed to use my power like that!"

Witch Princess: "Your choice. I'll have no option but to cut off your hair."

Harvest Goddess: "No! No! I'll help you."

The Harvest Goddess closed her eyes with a sorrowful look on her face. She glowed for an instant, then opened her eyes.

Harvest Goddess: "It was Skye who subdued your husband and stranded him on an island, frozen by power. Skye was jealous of him being married to you, so he took his revenge. You will need to act fast to rescue your husband, or he will die. I can show you how to get to him. Follow me."
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post May 5 2008, 07:56 PM
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Witch Princess: "Fantastic, Lets go right away."
Harvest Goddess: "Wait I must insisted that you leave him be, he may be like us but he ages like a human and he disapeard over 700 years ago. He wount be the man you married."
Witch Princess: "Don't be so sure of that my old friend, Edan is still my husbend and the father of my child, I have every right to have a famaily with him, just like the little dateing game you played with Skye and Keria."
Harvest Goddess: "Leave them out of this!"

(OK I think jello is right every story needs an ending but this one has a long way to go.)
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post May 5 2008, 08:15 PM
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WP:" Ok if you wish but get my husband!!!!!!!
HG:" I will try."

Back at the sprite tree Mark fully awoke and gradded Clair. He hugged her until she pulled away.

( Sorry I haven't been on some thing came up. ) ( We should let the WP find her husband then end it with problems solved....for now.... ) Any one else got any ideas.
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post May 5 2008, 11:23 PM
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"Mark....."Claire started, then quickly looked to see if Grey was around, "I want you to thank Grey for what he did."
"WHAAAAAAATTT!!!!!" Mark shouted,"IT'S HIS FAULT WE WERE IN THIS MESS IN THE FIRST PLACE!!!!!"

(I agree with Louey & Hitsu, I like this long story, but if it does end soon I'd like it to end with Claire and Grey getting married and having a child)
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post May 5 2008, 11:36 PM
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Claire: "HOW DARE YOU BLAME HIM AFTER HE SAVED YOU'RE LIFE!!!!!"
Mark was so shocked and baffeld at why Gray would'nt just leave him to die and be with Claire.



(thats probly how thats going to end but when this is done with I'd like to do another one with Lilly, Jason and Bella as teanagers. my plan is to have Bella with boy troble and Lilly helping her get a summer boyfriend. But thats just my idea)
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Louey & Hits...
post May 6 2008, 01:28 AM
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Mark sighed "Fine."
Gray was standing beside an old oak tree staring at the sky, he thought to himself: This has been some adventure.
"Gray." Mark came up beside him.
For a minute Gray began to panic but hen Mark contiued "Thank you, for saving us."

(Yeah I lik long stories but it has gone a bit far, but referring back to Domeki-Kun's comment, it doesn't matter if its gone off topic, its just a made up story that allows people to put in anything they want. ^^)
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post May 6 2008, 07:30 AM
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Skye: "I'd hate to breck up this happy moment but we've got some work to do."
Mark: "Why should we help you after what you did!?"
Skye: "Well actuly Mark I don't realy need you I just need Jack and miss Claire over there. You see right now the wicth is looking for her long lost husbend, long story short, it's not going so well. If my rearch is corect then Jack and Claire are her husbends only liveing relatives, well you're kids are tecnicly relatives to but they are far to young to to what I'm about to ask."
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post May 6 2008, 04:47 PM
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The next evening, the Harvest Goddess was flying though the air on a broomstick, followed closely by the Witch Princess and her daughter on another broomstick.

Witch Princess: "Skye! It was him all along! We just need to find my husband. Being married to me has made him more or less as immortal as me, so he won't appear to have aged a bit. Once Eden is rescued, I will deal with that Skye once and for all."

Lil' Witch: "Yep. With any luck, he should be rescued before Winternight, in a month's time."

Harvest Goddess: "Winternight? What's that?"

Witch Princess: "Every 13 centuries, on the date of the starry night festival, Winternight comes. It's an incredibly dangerous day when the sun is replaced by the moon for any amount of time and evil spirits roam free, appearing wherever there are shadows and people are by themselves. The only way to be safe is to be with someone else, the more people the better, and there must be light. Anywhere where there is no light or people will become dangerous and full of darkness. Last time I fought alongside you to keep the Valley free of the evil, remember? The forest was filled with those little glowing lights. It was five months before the darkness lifted - Winternight could last as long as anything."

Harvest Goddess: "So that's what it was. I remember. But next time... What if next Winternight lasts forever?"

Witch Princess: "I don't know."

Lil' Witch: "Can we go back to what we were doing please? We need to get to Skye's secret island!"

Harvest Goddess: "Oh, sorry. I never will get used to travelling by broomstick."
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post May 7 2008, 12:01 AM
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Skye was talking to Claire and Jack. "Do you remember a man named Eden?"
After thinking for a while, they both exclaimed "Oh, he was our Great-great-great-great-great-great....."
2 hours later "...great-great Granduncle!"
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post May 7 2008, 12:54 AM
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Skye: "Umm yea -_-, anyway for some reason this guy was locked in my island home, I don't remember the details but think the witch might have something to do with it. this guy has'nt said a word in years I think it's becuse hes to week so I'm going to use you two to help give him the enrgey to explan what hes doing in my house.
Claire: "Whats going to happen to us?"
Skye went over to a small trunk he had and grabed to wires eacth of them conected to Edens body.
Skye tells them to turn around and lift us there shirt just enugh so there back was bare, vary qicky he thrusted the wires into there backs giveing Jack and Claire a surge of pain.


(hey guys keep in mind that it's just thouse three there so I only ask that you don't have Gray, Kearn or Mark save them Ok ^_^.
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post May 7 2008, 03:12 PM
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(What Skye really wanted was to drain the life energy from Jack, Claire and Eden and put it into a staff to create an extremely powerful weapon he would use to force the Witch Princess to marry him and to kill her daughter. Jack, Claire and Eden would be dead from having their life sucked out.)

Skye laughed nastily and held both ends of the wire, sending powerful magic designed to drain life down each one. Jack and Claire were already suspicious of the man who had previously petrified Claire and Mark, and were both ready. They both twisted and the magical energy was sent back into Skye. He moaned and collapsed, unconscious.
Jack and Claire ran over to the bed where their ancestor Eden lay. They could not tell if he was dead or not, for there was no heartbeat and his eyes were shut. He looked slightly younger and more good-looking than Jack, Claire or Skye, but his long hair was as white as snow and was tied back.
A noise made them look round. Skye began to get up again, angrier than ever.

Just then, the Witch Princess and her daughter burst through the door. The Witch was holding the Legendary Sword that Keria had once been the guardian of.

Witch Princess: "Don't move, Skye, and I might just not kill you right now!"

Skye: *shocked and furious* "@!$&%!" *recomposes himself* "Well, well. A family reunion? How sweet. But don't worry, soon Jack, Claire, Eden, and that brat of yours will be dead and you will be my bride, with the power of the staff I am building."

Witch Princess & Li'l Witch: "(chant spell in unison)"

Skye: "I don't think so! (chants own spell, and Witch Princess & Li'l Witch begin to hover in the air bound by invisible ropes. The Legendary Sword clatters on the floor.) First of all, I will teach this brat a lesson."

Skye advanced towards the Witch Princess' daughter, holding a glowing red knife that had appeared from nowhere.

Jack: "NO! My neice (my great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great uncle's daughter)!"

Jack ran towards Skye, seizing him. Skye said something and Jack was propelled backwards through the air, hitting the wall with a thud.

Claire: "JACK!!!"

Claire grabbed the Legendary Sword, rushed at Skye and ran him through with it. The evil theif's eyes unfocused and he toppled over, the sword still stuck in his back. He crawled towards the door before anyone could stop him and flung himself off the cliff of the island into the seething waters below.

Five hours later

Jack, Claire, Mark and Grey sat around the Goddess pond talking.

Mark: "So that's it then. Skye is dead, and your great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great uncle has been rescued, allowing him to resume his life with the Witch Princess and their daughter. See, even the Witch Princess has a happy ever after, at least for now. Although somehow I don't think we've seen the last of Skye. Eden owned your farm in the valley 700 years ago, Claire. I expect he should be happy to see the work you have done there."

Grey: "Yes... On that subject, I've been thinking. Claire, w-would you... would you... oh..."

Claire: "What?"

Grey blurted it out all in one go. "Will you marry me?"

(Extremely sorry I did all that, it's way more than three sentances but the story needed it I think. I'm very sorry, please forgive me. If Claire marries Grey she will move to Mineral Town and the Witch Princess, Eden, and their daughter will move into Claire's farm in the valley)

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post May 7 2008, 09:54 PM
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Shocked, Claire blushed and began stuttering. "Um, I-I mean, what about the children?"
Mark was behind them, seething with anger.

(Whoa! Wait! aren't Claire and Mark still married? or am I wrong?><)
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post May 7 2008, 10:08 PM
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Gray chould'nt belave what he blerted out. he was going to ask if she would go back to waffle town. He tryed to explan that it was just a actident and he did'nt mean what he said (Well he did but noone in the right mind would ask a woman that right infrount of her husbend).



(They are unless they got divorsed right after claire got back from skye tower)
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