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May 9 2008, 05:20 PM
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#421
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
(No, they were not divorced. It's just that Grey has had a massive crush on Claire for ages and he kinda forgot all about Mark and said the first thing that came into his head.)
Sighing contentedly, Sebastian put the last of the flowers from the manor garden into the vase and went indoors. The first snow had started today, unusually early as it was the twentieth of Autumn. Sebastian was looking forwards to winter - Lumina said she was going to invite Rock round for the Starry Night festival, and Sebastian and Romana both agreed that it was time she took an interest in the Valley boys. But in the darkness outside, something watched him at the edge of the trees through the snowflakes, something dark and powerful, something malicious and evil. It was also looking forwards to the Starry Night festival, and for a special reason - Winternight! |
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May 10 2008, 07:07 AM
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#422
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It can't get much worse. Group: Veterans Joined: 25-February 08 |
(actualy if you read the early stuff in the fanfic it says that Gray and Cliare where maired. Claire left him becuse she thought he loved Mary, as I'm sure you know he did'int and has tryed to get her back ever since she got maired to Mark)
Nearly everyone was heading to Rosebud village to get the best view of the stars. There was a strangly cold fealing in the air most people just put on warm sweaters and hats but after what happend at Claire was not so sure her family should go to the festival at all, however she did'nt have much of a chouse whatever Mark said was law in there house and he wanted a nice family day out. |
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May 10 2008, 06:52 PM
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#423
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
It's Winternight tonight, thought the little witch as she sat staring at the stars. The Valley will be empty, as everyone's gone to Rosebud village to watch the night sky. Except the people at the manor - Sebastian, Romana, Lumina and Rock and the people at the Inner Inn - Ruby, Gustafa, Cody, Van, Kassey and Patrick. They're all having parties. Mother and Father are staying in Skye's tower, which Father has refurbished and made it into his own home and study, and I'm here looking after Mother's cottage. I wish I had someone here to keep me company. It's getting colder.
The little witch wrapped her arms around herself to keep herself warm. It was unnaturally cold. A snowflake touched her cheek, and she almost fell over in surprise. There was not a single cloud in the night sky. So where's the snow coming from then?!? She looked up at the sky and gasped. There were two moons in the sky. One was the familiar Harvest Moon, but the other... In the night sky there hung a second moon. It was much larger than the normal moon, and its surface was red like blood. Suddenly the witch was aware of an unseen prescence, filled with malice and hate. Whimpering in fear, the little witch grabbed her broomstick and flew of in the direction of Eden's tower. But when she opened the door, her parents were not there. (It is Winternight, and there will not be daytime until the events I will write resolve themselves. Please write the next post about what happens in Rosebud village as the assembled people there to see the stars start seeing the Blood Moon and strange apparitions on the edge of the village and in the sea. Remember to make sure there is no morning and the night just carries on through the daytime without the sun rising.) |
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May 10 2008, 07:40 PM
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#424
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08 |
Clair stood there and Held Bella. She hated that name now, but Mark loved it. Even though It was given by Skye. Clair didn't feel right, she felt that the Skye that died wasnt the real Skye, but she wasn't sure.
( Sorry I haven't been on my computer was messed up and we just got it fixed. I like where the stories going!! ) |
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May 10 2008, 08:10 PM
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#425
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
(Skye is dead but not finished. You'll see.)
Little Bella began to cry as the snowflakes swirled around. Under the sea, a pair of brightly glowing yellow eyes could be just visible from the beach for a few seconds, before vanishing into the murky depths. |
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May 11 2008, 02:47 PM
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#426
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08 |
Jason walked over to his mom and asked:" Mommy? What was that yellow thingy in the ocean?"
Clair:" Honey you must be seeing things. There was nothing there." Then Bella started to shiver. Mark walked over to Clair and Bella and put his coat on her. |
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May 12 2008, 02:50 PM
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#427
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
Then there was anther puzzling knock at the door. It was Gray. He asked clair to marry him. (I laughed for hours when I first read that, no offense meant.) (This is gonna an extremely long post, but hopefully it will be so good you won't mind.) Hesitantly, the little witch walked into her father's tower. Li'l Witch: "Mother? Father? Is anybody there?" A low sound like the whispering of wind in the trees swept through the tower. The tower had a cauldron at the back of the room, and bookcases and shelves where liquids bubbled in coloured tubes lined the walls. There was a small table next to the cauldron, which was empty. Up the stairs there was a small double bed, which looked like it had been occupied a little while ago and a purple rug. The light of the two moons shone through the tall window. And in the corner of the room, one of the shadows stirred. The little witch screamed. Back at the beach, the villagers had just noticed the dark red moon which had been uncovered by a cloud. The assembled people stared in wonder and fear at the second moon. They were all starting to be frightened, and they all stayed right next to the bonfire in the centre of the beach. Mark drew closer to Claire, holding her tight as they both looked at the sky. Bella tugged at her father's shirt. Bella: "Papa, there's something in the sea. I swear I saw two great big yellow things, like eyes. Papa, it's scaring me." Mark: "Don't be silly, Bella, there's... oh..." One by one the villagers saw the yellow eyes. Above, huge winged creatures were swooping around silently in the sky. The villagers began to scream, and as one, they all rushed away from the beach, parents picking up their children and all running away. Some went to the inn in Rosebud Village and some ran down the road, not stopping until they reached in Forget-me-not Valley and Mineral Town. The villagers barricaded themselves in their village's inn. Forget-me-not Valley, Inner Inn. The inn's two floors are filled with villagers - Thomas, Ruby, Rock, Lumina, Sebastian, Romana, Van, Grant, Kate, Hugh, Wally, Chris, Nina, Gustafa, Mark, Claire, Jason, Bella, Cliff, Luke, Grey, Gustafa, Daryll, Cody, Nami, Murrey, Muffy, Griffin, the Gourmet and his nephew Pierre who was visiting. Vesta, Celia, Marlin, Patrick, Kassey, Flora, Carter, Nina and Galen are at Vesta's farm. Mayor Thomas: "I can see whe are all scared by - " Griffin: "What the heck were those things in the sky?" Murrey: "And what were the eyes in the water, moi? Murrey was so scared he nearly dropped his dinner, moi!" Gourmet: "Oh, how shocking!" Grey: "And the second moon? There were two bloody moons in the sky!" Mark: "Yeah, Grey, we could all see how you nearly wet yourself in fright." Claire: "Mark!!!" Mark: "Sorry, just joking. Seriously, we need to stick together. It seems I heard the Witch Princess saying that things were going to happen tonight yesterday. She also said that if there was any danger we all needed to stick together in a place with light, and not leave any spaces in the building dark or uninhabited. Thankfully, we're all here togther now. We should just wait here till sunrise." Mayor Thomas "... My words exactly." The villagers slept on the floor or in the beds in the inn. Thankfully there was a large supply of sleeping bags. However, when the villagers awoke, the sun did not come up. The two moons still hung in the sky, now accompanied by pouring rain. |
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May 12 2008, 05:16 PM
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#428
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It can't get much worse. Group: Veterans Joined: 25-February 08 |
Claire was the first one to wake up. She looked up at the two moons and begain to wonder why this had to happen to her and her family, sudonly it hit her
Claire: "Jack and Karen are still in Mineral Town!" to make sure they where ok she grabed a lanturn and tryed to leave the safety of the inn and go look for them. She left a note on Marks chest telling him not to look for her and to take care of the babies if she did'nt come back. As she started to leave with tears of worry in her eyes someone tugged on her arm. Gray: "What are you doing? Don't you know how dangerous it is out there?" |
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May 12 2008, 08:00 PM
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#429
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08 |
Clair:" I realize that. But Karen Kack and Lily are still in Mineral Town."
Gray:" As long as there is light and they stay together they will be fine." Clair:" O...Ok I guess We should head back." |
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May 12 2008, 09:05 PM
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#430
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
Grey: "Didn't you see those things out there? You'll get torn to pieces!"
Claire: "You come with me then if you're so worried, Grey. Anyway, I still have that Legendary Sword." Grey: "... Alright. Come on then." Pierre: *waking up* "... huh? Er... could someone please tell me what's going on?" Grey: "Me and Claire are going to Mineral Town to get Jack, Karen and the others. Thomas decided it was best for us all to stay together." Pierre: "I'll come too. But we'll have to take a few others... Uncle would certainly be unfit for this sort of thing, but maybe Mark and Griffin would do. Or Gustafa. Wally's certainly fit enough. And Marlin might be able to help if we fetch him from Vesta's." After waking the others, Claire, Mark, Grey, Griffin, Gustafa, Wally and Pierre (all armed with lanterns, scythes and axes supplied by Grey, who happened to have a small supply of tools in the crates near Van's shop area) set off towards Mineral Town. In the distance they could see strange lights and faces in the trees, but they tried to ignore it and carried on. Gustafa: "... I feel too depressed for singing anythin other than a funeral march. This is scary." In the Harvest Sprite dormitories, the normally cheerful and mischeivous Sprites talked quietly and fearfully as they lay in bed. There was none of the usual teasing, laughing, chatting and refusing to go to sleep that accompanied most bedtimes for the Sprites, much to the Leaders' relief. They all had a subdued attitude, and for once the windows were all closed - nobody wanted to be reminded of what was outside. And if you had looked through the windows of Eden's tower, you would have seen the pale body of the Witch Princess' daughter lying cold, pale and naked in a pool of her own blood, and if you had listened closely, you might have heard the evil laughter of a certain silver haired thief above the wailing of the wind. Skye had not stolen a jewel or a bag of money, he had stolen a life. |
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May 12 2008, 11:26 PM
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08 |
Just ignore this post it was a mistake! Sorry!! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
This post has been edited by lukelover101: May 13 2008, 08:09 PM |
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May 13 2008, 03:39 PM
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
Once the small party arrived at Mineral Town, they joined the others in the Inn. Jack had temporarily taken charge, and the villagers were all frightened. They all decided that they would have to wait at least a few days to see what would happen.
The Sprite Tree. It is lunchtime but still night. Red Ribbon: *standing on table to adress Sprites* "Right, everyone. All work has been cancelled until this night clears." Sprites (all): "YAAAY! Hoggy: "Mmn, flour." Red Ribbon: "The Harvest Goddess has gone, and terrible things lurk outside. Darkness lies everywhere. A second moon, large and red, lies in the sky. We need to decide what to do" Chef: "Can we cook it?" Staid: *whispers* "No, Chef. It would taste all rocky." Baby Sprite: *bangs on plate with spoon* "Pudden time for Baby!" Red Ribbon: *sighs* A ruined castle. Thorns adorn the cracked stone walls and moonlight filters through the broken stained glass windows. A figure, hooded and cloaked, sits in a throne of Onyx while the Witch Princess and Eden are on their knees in front, in chains. Cloaked Figure: "Well, well, what have we here? If it isn't the pathetic witch and her insignificant husband? And my, you appear to be in chains, kneeling? How about that?" Witch Princess: "H-how dare you?" Cloaked Figure: "Soon my servant Skye - or his shadow, anyway - will have finished with your irritating little daughter. Then Eden can die and you can be handed over to Skye as a reward for his good work. I'm sure you will make him an excellent pet. It's nice to have finally beaten you." Witch Princess: "You won't get away with this! The Harvest Goddess will help us!" The laugh of the figure on the throne echoed through the hall. Cloaked Figure: "I think not. The Harvest Goddess is no more." This post has been edited by Hasfusel: May 14 2008, 07:19 PM |
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May 13 2008, 10:05 PM
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It can't get much worse. Group: Veterans Joined: 25-February 08 |
at Mineral Town
Claire was siting in the hallway while everyone else was trying to see if their loved ones were ok. Sudinly someone coverd her mouth and pushed her body against the wall and into the shadows. She tryed with all her enrgy to fight away but all she was able to do was remove his cloke. It was Skye, his eyes where red and his charming looks were all gone and his hands were cold and coverd in blood. Skye: "I was going to kill you but it would be a crime to waste such a lovely body, even if you are a mother." He pulled her face close to his and violently begin to kiss her. |
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May 13 2008, 10:16 PM
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08 |
Mark was discusted at Skye. He came around with his ax and atempted to wack him with it, but skye used some type of 'power' and throught Mark to the ground. Mark couldn't feel his legs or arms.
Clair pushed away with all of her might, she looked to her left and Gray was holding the twins, he was about to hand them off to Karen, and from there she would take them to the bed room, so knowing the twins were now safe Clair grabed Skye's arm and broke it, but something kreppy happened, Skye fixed his arm by touching it with his other hand. This post has been edited by lukelover101: May 13 2008, 10:17 PM |
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May 14 2008, 02:05 AM
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It can't get much worse. Group: Veterans Joined: 25-February 08 |
Skye: "You think you can get rid of me all by yourself? You're just a week little farmer."
Claire was petrafid, she thought she was going to die, her only hope was that Skye would let her die with dignity. Gray: "GET AWAY FROM HER YOU FREEK!' Gray griped him trusty hammer and swang away hopeing to get Claire freid from Skyes grasp. |
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May 14 2008, 03:18 PM
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
At that moment Skye grabbed his teleport necklace and vanished, as the other villagers came to see the commotion.
He reappeared in the castle hall where the cloaked figure sat on his throne. Skye's eyes were now bright red, and although he was still astonishingly good looking he had pale white skin almost the same shade as his hair, two of his teeth looked like fangs and there was a trickle of blood down his chin. He looked very frightening with his dark red cloak and his black clothes. Cloaked Figure: "Skye, you have failed me again. You were to bring back the one called Claire and the artifact she carried, the Legendary Sword." Dark Skye: "It was too much! There were others! They were armed!" Cloaked Figure: "You should have waited until she was alone, and in darkness. If you had, you would have had immense power. In the light, around others, your power is diminished. It was I who gave you the powers of the Darkness! And you dare to fail me, you ungrateful -" Dark Skye: "... I said I'm sorry, Sorcerellsus. I won't fail again." Cloaked Figure: "How DARE you utter my name?" Dark Skye: "You said it wasn't your real name, I thought it wouldn't matter." Sorcerellsus: "... You must make up for this by bringing to me this Claire. Use your powers to make a gateway to this castle, at midnight. Kill all those who follow." Dark Skye: "Right. And once you have finished what you need to do you will let me have her? Just because I want the Witch Princess it doesn't mean I can't enjoy myself with others, and she's a pretty one. Besides, I haven't fed yet." Skye bared his fangs with an evil grin. Sorcerellsus: "I will let you have the Princess once you have brought me Claire. But be careful of her sword, it's one of the few things that can hurt you." Dark Skye: "I will." Skye spread his cloak around him, and he was gone. (If you're having trouble picturing Skye in your head at the moment, think of him looking like a vampire. The clothes also are supposed to be Dracula style. Please let me do the writing for the bit where Skye tries to kidnap Claire.) |
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May 14 2008, 03:40 PM
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It can't get much worse. Group: Veterans Joined: 25-February 08 |
Back at the inn Claire was stil trumatised after someone she use to trust so much atacked her like that.
Claire" If I can't defend myself... how can I protect my children or my friends. Everyone thought it would be a good idea to give Claire her own room for the night. |
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May 14 2008, 06:08 PM
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
(Something drastic's gonna happen here and I realise you might not like it. If you don't like what has happened, Miss Kid, tell me and I will edit it. It's your fanfiction after all.)
However, Grey was not convinced. Grey: "If Claire's on her own the things could come and get her easily!" Claire: "Relax, everyone else is close by. They can all hear me if I shout for help." Mark: "Yeah, Grey, leave her her privacy." Grey: "All right, if that's how you're going to be." That night, Claire began to feel uneasy. Though she had left a candle lit she still felt quite scared on her own and for the dozenth time wished Mark was with her. Or Grey, she thought, and instantly wondered why she had thought that. Suddenly all the shadows flickered, and Claire began to realise her mistake. One of the shadows flickered. It was Skye. She screamed. Moments later Mark, Jack and Grey rushed into the room, armed with knives and scythes from Grey's forge (Grey held the Legendary Sword), to find Claire gone. A shimmering blue hole hung in the air. Not hesitating for a second, the three men stepped through, and found themselves outside a castle by the sea. The castle was in ruin, and the two moons shone brightly. Bats fluttered round the tallest tower of the castle. Grey: "CLAIRE!" Skye stood a little way down, strongly kissing an almost unconscious Claire, who's face was white. He had taken off her top and was starting to undo her bra. The three men charged. Skye let go of Claire, who collapsed, and pointed out his hand towards Jack and Grey, who flew backwards through the air, and then created another blue hole in the air, which opened onto the top of the tower. He ran through, and Mark followed, bellowing at the top of his voice and brandishing his knife. Jack and Grey sat up and rubbed their heads. They nudged Claire, who woke up and put her top back on. All three walked through the shimmering blue gateway, Grey passing the Sword to Claire. As they reappeared at the top of the tower, they saw Skye holding Mark as if kissing him, Skye's head pressed against Mark's. And then they saw Skye's two long fangs in Mark's neck. Mark's eyes were closed and his skin was deatlhy pale as his blood was drained out of his body. Skye let go of Mark, then pushed him off the edge of the tower. Mark's fall into the sea seemed to last a million years. Grey, Claire & Jack: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Skye made yet another gateway and fled through. The three followed, sobbing but filled with undescribable hate. The gateway opened into the castle hall, where Eden and the cloaked figure of Sorcerellsus were duelling with swords while the Witch Princess destroyed the last of the dark creatures that haunted the halls (The Witch Princess and Eden escaped from Sorcerellsus' dungeon). Skye ran down the hall, chased by Claire and the two men. Sorcerellsus broke away from the fighting for a second to point at Claire, Jack and Grey. They all were hurled at the wall with a vicious force, Claire dropping the Legendary Sword as she slid to the ground unconscious. The fighting grew more energetic, and Skye pounced on the Witch Princess, tearing off her cloak and trying to rip off her clothes. She punched him in the face and rolled away, coming up win a crouch. Skye ran towards her, drawing some sort of bone knife that glowed red with power. She blasted him back with a spell, sending his knife spiralling, but he got up again just as quickly. Knocking her to the floor, he tore off her top, put his mouth to her neck... And staggered backwards, his eyes glazing over and a little trickle of blood coming out the corner of his mouth. The Little Witch stepped backwards, pulling Skye's knife out of his back as the thief collapsed, and ran to her father's aid. Realising he was outnumbered, Sorcerellsus turned and fled into a shadow, vanishing from the world. Skye's body suddenly vanished, transforming into a bat which squeaked and flew out the broken window. The bat which was all that remained of Skye's soul flew through the night sky, down through the gateway, landing in Claire's room. Claire's cat, who had gone into the room to await the return of it's mistress, stared hungrily at the bat. Its claws unfurled slowly and it licked its lips. Skye: *squeak?* Later, Claire, Jack, Grey, Eden, Little Witch and the Witch Princess are gathered in the Inner Inn. Claire's cat enjoyed a delicious bat for lunch, and it had never tasted a mouse with wings before. Winternight has ended and the sky is blue, while the sun shines and birds sing in the trees. Leia the Mermaid and her family brought the dead body of Mark back to the Valley to be cremated. Little Witch had not in fact been killed when Skye stabbed her in Eden's tower but only badly wounded - the Harvest Goddess found her and healed her. Claire & friends have just gotten over Mark's death but they are still upset. The Harvest Goddess is back from Sorcerellsus' imprisonment, by the way. Claire: "So you say this Sorcerellsus who Skye served was some sort of dark sorcerer called Baron Carthoniel from another world?" (see my topic Shadowfall) Witch Princess: "Yes. It's a shame we didn't kill him, as I fear one day he will be back." Jack: "I will never forget Mark's brave sacrifice. I think we all loved him as a friend, and Claire's loss of her husband must be devastating." Claire: "..." Jack: "So why did Skye become so evil and powerful? How did he come back from the grave?" Eden: "Claire killed Skye in my tower. The Skye that came back was a shadow made of all the darkness in Skye's heart." Jack: "But now all the darkness has gone, the second moon vanished and the monsters disappeared. It is a time to celebrate!" Grey: "Yes... Claire, could you follow me to the Goddess Spring? I have something to tell you." (Thanks for reading. As I said, if you aren't happy with the fact that Mark's dead then tell me and I suppose I'll have to edit this, though I'd rather I didn't. In the next post please do Grey's proposal to Claire - Mary has left Mineral Town to live in Rosebud Village, and Mark is dead.) |
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May 14 2008, 08:45 PM
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08 |
While Clair left with gray, Karen, Jack and lily stayed at the inn to care for the twins. While Karen and jack were watching lilly play with them she told jack some pretty good news.
Karen:" Jack I don't know how you will take this but..." Jack:" Come on teel me!" Karen:" Ok you know how I have been sick right? Well I am going to have another baby." Jack:" Thats the most wonderful news!" |
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May 14 2008, 09:32 PM
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
Meanwhile...
Claire: "So, Grey, what is it you wanted to tell me? Grey: "Uh, I realise you're still getting over Mark and all that, but... uh..." Claire: "Yes?" Grey: *morbidly embarrassed* Iwantogebactogetheragain Claire: "... Sorry?" Grey: "I mean... w-w-w..." Claire: "Go on..." Grey: "Will you marry me?" Looking at the couple through the shimmering liquid in her cauldron, the Witch Princess smiled. |
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