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Zen Clarke
post Aug 9 2010, 11:48 PM
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Am I the only one to notice that all of the admins were bad guys? (I include Jason because he ratted us out at one point.) Are you making a statement, Oscar? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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Oscar
post Aug 10 2010, 12:09 AM
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*notices it*

To be honest with you, no, I didn't mean it to be that way. It just kind of happened...

But I guess my brain said "put admins with admins" or something. Wow. It's funny that it did turn out that way. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) STAY TUNED FOR THE FINAL CHAPTER!
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Oscar
post Aug 10 2010, 06:07 AM
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Chapter 16- That Sinking Feeling

HMR landed the helicopter near Zen and got off to help Zen up from the ground.

"Are you alright, Zen? Oscar, Dani and Crystal told us you had disappeared, so we came looking for you," HMR grabbed Zen by the hand.

"I'm fine, than-" Zen suddenly saw TBR and Saffy running towards the main building where Saffy lived.

"I...I gotta go!" Zen ran towards Saffy and TBR, not even looking back at the helicopter or at Crystal who was yelling her name.

"Where the heck is she going?" Chris asked HMR.

"She's going after Saffy. Maybe we can go land on the roof of the building Zen is headed to and help Zen out?" HMR looked around at everyone, but Dani was getting uneasy.

"Look! There's a bunch of Riesgo soldiers walking this way! And even helicopters! I'll take care of them." Dani pulled out a grenade launcher that was sitting in the back of the helicopter and ran outside towards the soldiers.

"She's insane!" Crystal yelled.

"Yeah and that'll help us fly by without being harmed. Let's move out, HMR!" Chris signaled for HMR to launch off, but Oscar motioned to stop.

"Twi and Totoro have been alone for quite some time, I'm gonna go see how they're doing." Oscar got out and Crystal jumped out with him.

"I'll join you." Crystal smiled and they rand towards the direction of the gate. The ground still rumbling beneath them.

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"Look, Tyler!" ZBoy pointed to something on the ground.

"Why...it's my flamethrower! Oh my! It's just here! Thank goodness; this will help us." Tyler picked up the flamethrower and smiled.

It was then that Lindstrom flew down from the sky and pointed his arm-gun at them.

"No prisoners are to escape!" the robot yelled.

"Get a taste of this, Lind-bot!" Tyler pulled a trigger and the flamethrower shot out a devastating flame. Lindstrom shot a bullet, which passed through the flames and into the the flamethrower, causing an explosion that knocked ZBoy, Tyler and Lindstrom back. But ZBoy and Tyler were left with minor scratches and burns, while Lindstrom had completely caught on fire and began to melt.

"See, you are made of cheap material." laughed Tyler.

ZBoy then noticed that Lindstrom was ready to shoot one last bullet to Tyler and so he jumped in front of Tyler, taking a bullet to the thigh for Tyler.

"ZBoy!" Tyler screamed and went to ZBoy.

"I'm okay...I think. Let's just head back to the gate, Tyler. I want to ge-get out of here." ZBoy cringed in pain.

Tyler nodded and lifted ZBoy up to his back. But the ground began to tremble and open beneath them. A huge crack appeared under Tyler's feet and suddenly the crack widened and Tyler fell into the darkness of the earth along with ZBoy.

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Twi and Totoro were growing bored of waiting for the N-Team to come back. They had even seen a burst of light in the distance and wondered what it was. While the two chatted amongst themselves, a bloody hand appeared out of the empty river.

"What's that?!" Totoro shrieked.

A young, black haired girl emerged from the river. She was covered in blood, her right arm was missing and part of her skull was showing. Twi noticed a golden necklace around her.

"Charmy! She's back! Quick, shoot, Totoro!" Twi shook Totoro and Totoro brought out her gun and shot three bullets to Charmy, but Charmy quickly made a stopping motion with her left hand and froze the bullets in the air.

"We never finished our little fight, ha ha!" Charmy then threw the bullets back at Totoro, all of them hitting her in the stomach.
Totoro collapsed in pain and dropped the gun. Twi quickly grabbed it and shot back at Charmy and again she was too distracted with her laughing to notice the incoming bullets that penetrated her head, making her fall back into the riverbed.

"Totoro! We need to get you help. Stay with me!" Twi was about to pick up Totoro when the ground opened up beneath them, causing both sisters to fall into an infinite blackness. As they fell they reached for each others hands and closed their eyes.

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Oscar and Crystal continued to feel the ground shake beneath them. They began to worry.

"I don't know what's going on. We should hurry to the ga-" Crystal stopped Oscar and pointed to the gate which was now nearby.

Oscar looked and saw that the gate itself was falling underground.

"What's going on?!" Oscar exclaimed.

"I don't know...but let's get out of here! Let's go...let's go to...I don't know." Crystal sat on the ground thinking.

"There's nowhere to go. Look behind you, Crystal. All of Riesgo is being swallowed by the earth." Oscar sat next to Crystal with wide eyes.

Crystal glanced back and saw the ground vanishing piece-by-piece. She began to cry.

"...What do you think Ken is doing right now, Crystal?" Oscar looked back at her and smiled.

"What?!" Crystal looked confused.

"I mean do you think he's playing or something?" Oscar's eyes began to water.

"Oh...I hope so. I gave him a ball of yarn before I left. It was a big bright blue ball. He loves yarn." Crystal tried to smile back at Oscar.

"I bet he's really happy right now; having a lot of fun with that yarn." Oscar began to feel the ground open up.

"Yeah...I hope he is..." Crystal glanced back at Oscar's smiling face for the last time as she and him plunged into the earth.

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Dani shot out grenades left and right as if she had done it all her life. She blasted Riesgo soldiers and helicopters out of sight.

"That's for Orie!" Dani yelled in triumph. She then noticed a small young man walking towards her.

"I come in peace, ha ha," the gentleman smiled. "I'm Lenyo and well, I think you should get out of here before it's too late."

"Too late? What do you mean?" Dani asked.

"You see, the Doomsdayvice has just fired its enormous laser into the ground. If my predictions are correct, the rumbling you're hearing and feeling is the disappearance of all the mass, or all the ground, beneath Riesgo. I'm afraid all of Riesgo is going to collapse deep down into the earth, hundreds of miles down." Lenyo gloomly said.

"No...that can't be. I have to warn everyone! Zen just went into that building there! Let me start with her!" Dani ran towards the main building of Riesgo but was shot from behind by a soldier. She fell to the ground and all she could think about was warning the others. It wouldn't have mattered, because at that moment the earth opened up and took down Lenyo, numerous soldiers and Dani.


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"Aren't we going to help Zen, HMR?" Chris asked.

"No...I'm flying this thing out of here. I don't want to be on anyone's side. I just want to get the heck out of Riesgo finally." HMR said quickly.

"Ha ha! I agree, man, I agree." Chris headed to the back of the helicopter to look for some drinks, but it was then that bullets came breaking into the helicopter, hitting HMR in the chest. The helicopter spun around and dove down to Riesgo. Chris ran up and took control of the helicopter and was able to land safely on the ground.

"Man! That was close. Hang on, HMR. I'll see if there's some medical kit in t-" HMR grabbed Chris in the arm and motioned for him to stop talking.

"There's no point...I'm gonna die, Chris. And I want you to know that I had many good times hanging out with....with...you." HMR began struggling to breathe.

"No, man, you're gonna be fine! It's just a couple of bullets! We'll fix you right up. We'll get you an iron chest! Yeah. That'll help. Right?" Chris noticed that HMR had stopped breathing. Chris sat back down and punched his seat.

"This isn't fair! Why..." Chris began to feel the helicopter shaking. He heard a loud crumbling noise and he immediately noticed that the ground beneath them had disappeared. He then looked out through the glass and saw nothing but darkness; he felt weightless. That's all he saw as he and HMR's body fell into the mess caused by the Doomsdayvice.


****

I lied. I thought I'd end it tonight, but I possibly cannot add the final battle between Zen and Saffy in here, along with TBR's past....It'll make it much too long! Expect it to finally be over tomorrow! :D And commmmmment!
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Charmy
post Aug 10 2010, 09:43 AM
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I wish I got to come back again, just to piss everyone off and be like, "Haha~ I'm not actually dead yet~"

I'll be waiting for the finale. ;D
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Katie
post Aug 10 2010, 02:14 PM
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Oscar.
You made me tear up at the part where the two of you mentioned Ken. :c
Bahhhh, so sad.
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Zen Clarke
post Aug 10 2010, 02:41 PM
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Everyone we love is dyiiiiiing!!! *cries*
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ZBoy
post Aug 10 2010, 04:00 PM
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Oh. My. Gosh. These last few chapters have been epic. You really did well with beinging things to an end. I can not wait for the finale!
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Daniella
post Aug 10 2010, 09:18 PM
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Sounds like Oscar's watched the Lord of the Rings.

T'was awesome though, except for the part when I died. :3
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Toaster Boy
post Aug 10 2010, 09:23 PM
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My past? That made me laugh.
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ZBoy
post Aug 10 2010, 10:24 PM
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Daniella, at least you died while trying to help.
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Oscar
post Aug 11 2010, 12:59 AM
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Charmy: Yeah, you'd be a skeleton then. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) But now, you're dead for sure now.


Katie: You did? I was going for a sad moment! I'm glad you did get teary eyed. :D


Zen: Yeah, everybody is dead. Except for you Saffy and TB now.

ZBoy: Hey, thanks! I'm glad you're liking it.


Dani: I actually have never ever seen the movie or anything. XDXD

Annnnd TB: Yep, you've got a flashback that will cause a life changing event...
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Zen Clarke
post Aug 11 2010, 01:13 AM
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QUOTE (Oscar @ Aug 10 2010, 07:59 PM) *
Dani: I actually have never ever seen the movie or anything. XDXD

What? You've NEVER seen LotR??
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Oscar
post Aug 11 2010, 06:02 AM
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Zen: Nope, never. I just didn't get into it. I'd like to see it one day...



Chapter 17- The Final Inferno


Zen ran to the enormous honeycomb-shaped building. When she came inside she caught a quick look at Saffy and TBR leaving up on the elevator. She payed attention to the numbers above to see what floor they'd stop in. She guessed the very top floor, where Saffy lived, the 105th floor and she was right. When the elevator came down she stepped in, pushed the button labeled "105" and she went up.

As she passed dozens of floors, she had some time to herself. She thought about Nayome. She thought about the Receivers. She even laughed when thinking that it was her who was about to confront Saffy.

The elevator doors swung open and Zen stepped out. She noticed that at the end of the hallway, Saffy's room door was opened. She ran passing what seemed like hundreds of portraits of Saffy, but the last portrait was one of Saffy and Katie smiling. She entered the room, only to have the door shut behind her by TBR.

"We were expecting you, Zen." TBR calmly said.

"Yes, we were. And I think it's time that I take care of a very important matter." Saffy said, but never glanced back at Zen. He just stared out the window.

"And what might that be, your highness," Zen mocked.

"It's killing you." Saffy stared back with a frustrated look in his eyes. "TBR! Finish her, please! She's been nothing but a pain since she came to Riesgo. She's poisoned me! Poisoned me with her idiotic behavior!"

TBR's eye-gun popped out further from his socket. He aimed steadily at Zen.

"Any last words?" TBR smiled.

"Yeah; you're a traitor, Roger. C'mon! What are you doing here! You can't honestly support everything Saffy is doing? And everything he does, he does it for himself. Open your one and only eye and see what's been going on, Roger!" Zen screamed at TBR, using his real name.

"The boss helps me out. He gives me a purpose in life. I feel rewarded for all this; I get to join Saffy in his world domination and be on top! I am not gonna step off and join you losers." TBR got ready to fire, but it was then that something came into his mind. A memory.

TBR remembered Molly, his girlfriend. The one thing in life that he loved more than anything. He remembered coming back home on a late night. Saffy had had him training new recruits; a job which wasn't his. When he opened the door to his bedroom he had found Molly brutally murdered. She had been stabbed and shot multiple times. When he came back to Saffy the next day, Saffy only told him that "it was for the best" and that "she was interfering".

"You had her killed, didn't you, Saffy?!" TBR directed his attention to Saffy now.

"Do not say my name! I am above you." Saffy yelled back at TBR. "And yes, I did have her killed, so what? You would be late sometimes or you'd have to leave early other days for her. You'd be distracted."

"I can't believe this! I've been blind since I started working for you. You do only care about yourself, Saffy, you could care less about me and what I've done! I loved her, Saffy! I loved her so much. I quit." TBR pulled his eye gun back into his socket as he got ready to exit.

Saffy pulled out his revolver from his pocket and shot a bullet straight into TBR's eye-gun. The impact caused sparks to fly out of TBR's head.

"Aaaa! My head! It hurts!" TBR grabbed his head in pain and fell to the ground.

His right eye rolled into the back of his head as he died. His brain had been completely fried.

"I don't care about you TBR and I never have or will. You're one of my workers and I am way better than you. You like me for that same reason; because I have power. Ha ha!" Saffy laughed and stepped on TBR's face.

"You're next, Zen!" Saffy pointed the gun at Zen who was still shocked from the horrible sight of TBR's death and his past.

But at that moment, the lights went out and the entire building began to shake. Saffy fell to the ground and so did Zen. But Zen took advantage of the moment to crawl out of the room. She noticed stairs up ahead, she could see them from a faint light coming from a window. She ran to them and climbed the stairs. The stairs took her to the roof of the honeycomb building. She ran to the side and looked down at Riesgo. She saw buildings crumpling, people disappearing into the darkness of the earth and she heard glass shattering everywhere around her. Her eyes were glued to the amazing and the equally devastating site at Riesgo.

"You little brat! Don't you think I saw you running out! But now I've got you. You have nowhere to go." Saffy brought out his revolver, but again the building shook and he fell to the ground dropping his gun. Zen ran over and picked up.


"The power you have is horrible, Saffy. I'm gonna end your evil reign right now!" Zen shot out multiple bullets at Saffy. One hitting him in the head, others in his hands and arms and another in his chest.

It was then that Zen noticed that Saffy was not human, but a robot. The bullet holes revealed wires and electric sparks. But the bullet hole in his head revealed a brain encased in a thick glass.

"I am not a human, Zen. These bullets don't hurt me at all. But this will!" Saffy's skin on his hands began to melt off and beneath were two robotic hands. Sparks began to shoot out from them. He then got up and punched Zen in the face, knocking her back from the pain from the punch and the electric shock that came with it.

Zen jumped up and began to kick Saffy, but Saffy would block every hit with his arms. Saffy then grabbed Zen by the leg and shocked her whole entire body with a jolt of electricity.

Zen flew back to the ground. Saffy came running towards her but Zen got up to meet Saffy and punched him straight in the gut or at least where his gut would be. Sparks flew from Saffy's stomach as Zen's hand was caught trapped within the stomach. She received even more extreme shocks, but when she took her hand out, she pulled wires from Saffy's insides.

"I can't believe this is you, Saffy. And you hate robots so much..." Zen threw the wires to the floor and tackled Saffy to the ground. She punched him twice, but Saffy grabbed her blue hair and burned it with his electric hands.

Zen screamed in panic and began to put out the flames with her hands. Saffy reached over for the revolver that was on the ground and pointed it to Zen as she was distracted. He pulled the trigger plenty of times, but only one bullet was left and it shot straight to Zen's stomach.

"Guuuh!" Zen clenched her stomach. She looked at Saffy, the robotic human. And behind Saffy she saw a full moon. "You know there is such a thing as an octopus who can see the future."

"What are you talking about? You're lucky there was only one bullet left. But now your luck changes, Zen. I will strangle you with my bare hands!" Saffy got up and his hands began to glow intensely.

"It's time you pay for all the murders you have committed; for all the lives you've ruined! For the grief you've caused and for the blood that you've let spill across the world. Today Riesgo dies with you, Saffy!" Zen ran full speed at Saffy who waited for her.

He attempted to stop Zen's attack at him, but she came at him too fast and his hands were unable to shock her out of the way. He pushed Saffy to the edge of the roof and Saffy fell, but managed to grab on with his hand.

Saffy looked down and he saw his precious skyline disappearing. He saw the throne building collapsing into the ground. Everything was vanishing from sight and into the darkness underground.

The building began to tremble even harder than before and Zen fell backwards to the floor. Saffy managed to hold on and he began to pull himself up. But Zen saw him in time and she ran at him again, this time she jumped in the air and pushed Saffy from the ledge and threw him out into the open air. Both Saffy and Zen fell.

As they fell from the rooftop, Saffy punched Zen in her wound. Zen felt an intense electric shock throughout her body and began to feel faint, as if she were about to lose consciousness. But she fought back and grabbed Saffy's arm and pulled it out from her bullet wound. She kicked Saffy towards the building. Saffy's whole backside scrapped along the honeycomb building and his head smashed so hard against the concrete, that the glass keeping his brain sheltered, had broken and his brain had fallen out. More sparks flew from him.

"You're dead, Saffy...and look at your kingdom, it's dying with you. Good riddance." Zen looked away from Saffy's disfigured body to the bright full moon that shined down on her. "I die with victory and with all of the people who fought Riesgo." Saffy and Zen fell deep into the earth and the honeycomb building, the remaining sight at Riesgo, fell with them.

It had taken Saffy years to build his kingdom, but it only took a short while to have it taken away and by a few people who had enough courage to face the darkness.


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It's over, everyone! And I would like to thank every single person who read the story and commented on it! It was you that kept it going.

I had a lot of fun writing this and I know I'm no author, far from it (way far), but it was meant for fellow RS members to read and also have some fun. I hope you enjoyed your role in the story and I'd like some final comments, please! Say anything you want! And thanks again everyone, I hope I entertained ya.

Again, I'd really appreciate some closing comments!
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ZBoy
post Aug 11 2010, 06:14 AM
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We need a clapping smiley. This entire story was amazing and epic. I think a prequel of the building of Riesgo would be an amzing story. Just throwing that out there... ;D
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Charmy
post Aug 11 2010, 06:19 AM
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Zen, Hero of Reisgo!

Thank you Oscar for writing this, is was really fun to read, and I'm glad you included a lot in the last chapters. I do wonder how Saffy feels about being portrayed so evil-ly.

It was a great story. ^-^
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Oscar
post Aug 11 2010, 06:40 AM
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ZBoy: Thank you! Hey, you're right. Well, I'll keep that in mind!

Charmy: Thanks Charmy and you're welcome, haha! Yeah, I think he doesn't mind. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) I bet he loved his role.
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ZBoy
post Aug 11 2010, 07:06 AM
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I was going to originaly mention maybe a future sequel, but then I thought about how most of the characters would be dead...

But yes, a prequel to how the land became how it was would be very epic. How long did Zen hide out as a servant of Saffy? How did Saffy truly create his kingdom? What was the land like before Riesgo was made? How did SAffy's minions get pulled in to serving Saffy? There are so many questions that would make it an amazing story.
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Zen Clarke
post Aug 11 2010, 07:25 PM
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Aw, everybody died. But at least I killed Saffy. <3 Orie!

Amazingly amazing (:D). I loved reading it. And thank you for having me as the main character. *glomp* :3
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Rebecca
post Aug 11 2010, 08:24 PM
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.... I was gone for who knows how long and I miss this much?! This is awesomeness.
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Oscar
post Aug 11 2010, 08:31 PM
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ZBoy: Yeah, haha, everybody is dead. So a sequel wouldn't be a good idea. Maybe a prequel someday. But not anytime soon.


Zen: You're welcome! And Orie knew the day you were gonna die the whole time.

Rebecca: Thanks and you appeared briefly in a chapter. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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