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Oscar
post Jul 31 2010, 08:09 AM
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Katie did do a crazy thing. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) But it was supposed to be crazy. She was crazy in love! Haha, I just had that scene imagined from the beginning.

Well, Noviwan will be in the next one and I think you too, TB. I think...
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post Jul 31 2010, 01:30 PM
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;w;

Chapter made me sad inside. </3
uhm. I should spurt magic wings and FLY. I will MAKE Saffy love me. D;
Robots can love! Wall-E did it!
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post Jul 31 2010, 01:35 PM
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Katie loved me so much she killed herself because she couldn't have me? D: Katie, I never knew...

Also, that poor Saffy fellow. He hates because he cannot love!
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Christopher
post Jul 31 2010, 03:33 PM
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How can Saffy love a woman when he's gay anyways? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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post Jul 31 2010, 03:36 PM
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He didn't want to break her heart, so he only used the robot-ness as an excuse.

EDIT: Oh, hey! There's a guest reading, too! *waves*
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Oscar
post Aug 2 2010, 06:11 AM
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Chapter 10- Betrayal

A big, dark skinned man approached Zen, as she was throwing a coin into the enormous water fountain located in the center of Nayome.

"You must be Zen! Yes, don't answer that, I already know!" the stranger told Zen.

"Not this again! Let me guess, you're here to try and kill me, right?" Zen sighed.

"Well, yeah. Great, you've ruined the surprise." the stranger frowned.

"And by the way, I'm Noviwan. You know, thought I'd let you know before..." Noviwan did not finish, because he had crouched down to the ground and had begun to shake.

Suddenly, his shirt started to rip off as clumps of hair grew out of his skin. His face sprouted hair, his ears disappeared and new, pointier, ones appeared above his head. His arms and legs seemed to have shrunk and enormous claws took the place of his nails. Finally, his teeth sharpened down to spikes. He was now a ferocious looking bear.

Noviwan the bear got up on his legs and growled at Zen. He went back down and began to claw at Zen; scratching her leg.
Zen ran to the other side of the fountain, limping all the way. She saw that at the top of the fountain was a statue of a lady holding a spear and a shield. She began to climb the fountain, as the bear began to tackle the base of the fountain, nearly shaking Zen off.

Once Zen reached the top, she pulled the spear off of the statue's hand and pulled out the shield, too. The bear then rammed the fountain so hard, that Zen fell over backwards, landing right in the water. The bear followed her in.

Zen stuck out her shield every time the bear would claw at her, barely protecting herself. After a couple of swipes, the shield crumbled into pieces and Zen was left with just her spear. She stabbed the bear in the stomach, but it barely did anything; the spear was hardly sharp at all and the bear had a strong stomach.

"Tonight I eat like a king!" the bear growled as he opened his mouth and leaned forward to Zen.

But at that moment, the bear was shot from behind multiple times. He fell into the water, dead. Standing behind the bear was TBR with his eye gun out.

"TBR! You saved me!" Zen got out of the water and ran towards TBR, hugging him.

"It was nothing, really. I can't believe nobody else heard a bear growling." said TBR, happily enjoying the hug.

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After the bear had been taken out of the fountain, TBR and Zen headed towards the cafe.

"Hey, Zen, do you think you can tell me where you put the spherium?" TBR asked.

"Umm, why do you want to know?" Zen looked confused.

"Well, if something were to happen to you, I'd like to make sure I can keep the spherium safe. Assuming something happens to you, of course. But you're a strong girl!" TBR explained with a confident look.

"Thanks, TBR. I keep it in my bedroom, under the floorboards. But please don't tell anyone!" Zen stopped and made sure TBR nodded. "Hey, let's go to the cafe. I'm hungry!"

"I already ate. But you go ahead. Maybe I'll come visit ya later today. I think I'm just gonna go home and relax." TBR smiled as he began to walk away from Zen.

But TBR wasn't going home to relax. He was tired of waiting for the Receivers and their failure to follow Saffy's orders. He was taking matters into his own hands. He went to Zen's house, broke down the door and rushed to her bedroom. He ripped the floorboards and found the spherium glimmering back at him. TBR ran out of Zen's house and out of Nayome to Riesgo. Little did he know, Totoro was also leaving Nayome and on her way to Riesgo.
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post Aug 2 2010, 06:37 AM
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Toto is a problem why? I have a freaken CANNON.
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Oscar
post Aug 2 2010, 05:57 PM
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Haha, Totoro won't be a much of a problem, but that's because you two won't actually fight each other or anything.
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Zen Clarke
post Aug 2 2010, 11:56 PM
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Psh, like I'd ever trust Toast with any of my secrets. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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Oscar
post Aug 4 2010, 06:11 AM
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This chapter is a bit longer, but I hope you enjoy it! I didn't want to split this up into two chapters.


Chapter 11- Rejoice?

TBR reached the Riesgo gate. He entered the code (which had been changed after Mizuki escaped) and the door opened. He walked in and the door shut behind him. Totoro was hiding not far behind TBR. She had jumped into some bushes and from her angle she had seen the code TBR entered. It was 7-1-0-9. She ran towards the door, entered the code and ran inside.

When Totoro reached Riesgo, she stopped to stare at the amazing skyline. She wondered how such an evil place could be so beautiful at the same time.
Her dreams of finding her sister always took place in Riesgo. She figured if she snuck around Riesgo, then maybe she'd find her sister or at least get a clue to where she might be. But first she had to rescue Jason. She knew Saffy would keep the antidote with him in his throne room or his bedroom.


Totoro snuck past the guard towers and into the entrance of the golden dome building, where Saffy's throne room was. The entrance had an enormous waterfall in the center falling from the ceiling. The entire room was painted a dark blue and the floor had light blue tiles.

"Who are you and why are you here so late?" an orange haired girl asked. Her eyes were also a fiery orange and she wore black boots, jeans and an orange t-shirt.

"Oh, well, I'm Saffy's new assistant. I'm here to replace that traitor, Zen." Totoro politely smiled back at the orange-haired girl.

"Ahh, nice to meet you. I'm Twi. I'll show you where the throne room is," the orange girl no longer looked so serious and instead gestured to Totoro to follow her.

Both women took the elevator to the top floor. When the doors opened, Twi brought out a small key and opened the door that was blocking the exit out of the elevator.

"This is the throne room. You'll be here with Saffy most of the time." Twi smiled.

The room was made out of gold, like the outside of the building. There were pillars lining the walls of the room. Each had a statue of Saffy on top. At the end of the room, completely opposite from where the two girls were standing, was a bright blue throne.

"That's where the boss sits. Nobody is allowed to sit there, but him!" Twi pointed to the throne.

It was then that Totoro noticed that Twi had a teddy bear hairpin on her hair.

"It's you! You are my sister!" Totoro exclaimed with joy, but Twi looked back with a frown.

"What?! I am not your sister! You're lying!" Twi yelled.

"Yes, see, I have a hairpin, too!" Totoro dug out her teddy bear hairpin from her pocket and showed Twi. "I was lying about being Saffy's new assistant. I was here looking for you, sister!" Totoro threw her hands out and was ready to hug Twi, but Twi pulled out a gun and pointed it at Totoro's head.

"You lied to me?! How do I know you're really my sister?! My sister is dead! Nobody tricks me and gets away with it." Twi moved the gun closer to Totoro.

Totoro quickly ran behind a pillar, as Twi shot back to her, but she missed.

"Aha! So now you're running away! You do have something to hide!" Twi eyed the pillar.

Totoro skipped from pillar-to-pillar as Twi shot. But Twi would still miss every time, hitting the pillars instead. Totoro made it to the last pillar. She didn't know where to go and Twi was now running to her. She jumped up near the throne, but before she could get behind it, she tripped on the small dresser Saffy kept. All the contents spilled out of the dresser and Totoro was left in plain sight for Twi to find and shoot.
Twi jumped up to Totoro and pointed the gun.

"Do it, kill me! Kill your sister. At least I finally found you..." Totoro's eyes were full of tears as she closed them, awaiting the bullet.
But Twi fell to her knees and hugged Totoro.

"I'm sorry! I don't know why I shot at you. It's just, well, I thought my sister was dead. I thought you were here to fool me..." Twi began crying along with Totoro.

"Oh, Twi, please believe me, I am your sister. You don't know how happy I am to have found you!" Totoro hugged Twi back.

It was then that Totoro noticed a small vial labeled "Antidote" laying on the floor. She figured it fell from inside the dresser she had tripped over.

"Twi, not only am I here to find you, but I'm also here to save Jason." Totoro took the vial and showed Twi. "This is what will bring him back to his human self. I know we just met and we have a lot to talk about, but do you think you can help me save him? Do you think you can join me back in the South Land?" Totoro looked back at Twi, awaiting an answer.

Twi smiled. "Why, I've been waiting for you for so long. I had given up and joined Riesgo. I thought I had nothing to really live for. But I have my sister now and I am not letting you go!" Twi smiled back and hugged Totoro once again.


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The two sisters made it to Saffy's room. Twi took out the key she had used to open the throne room to now open the bedroom door.

"Jason should be in here. We sneak in, grab him and then leave. Saffy is sleeping inside." Twi whispered to Totoro.

They both walked into Saffy's room. Immediately they saw Jason the parrot in his cage by Saffy's bed. Jason was also fast asleep. Twi whispered to Totoro to stay near the door, while she quietly made it over to the cage. She opened the cage door and grabbed Jason by the beak. Jason awoke and attempted to squawk, but Twi was holding Jason's beak to tightly for him to say anything.

Twi and Totoro ran to the hallways and Totoro quickly opened the vial and forced Jason to drink the liquid. In a matter of seconds, the bird began to transform into a human being.

"So, you came to save Jason, huh?" a voice said from behind. It was Saffy. He took out his revolver and shot. The bullet hit Jason right on his left arm.

"Looks like he's human now, but you see, the bullet that is now inside his arm is a special bullet made here in Riesgo. It contains a powerful poison that will contaminate your entire circulatory system; killing you off in, hmm, an hour or two?" Saffy grinned.

Twi, Totoro and Jason all ran down the hallway, but Saffy didn't bother to call security. He just stood there laughing.
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Zen Clarke
post Aug 4 2010, 02:33 PM
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Aw. Reunited, then Jason has to go and get himself shot.
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ZBoy
post Aug 4 2010, 03:29 PM
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This story is EPIC. The fact that people are dying and everyone like caries a weapon with them is crazy! Totoro was looking for her sister huh? That sure sounds familiar. :P
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Zen Clarke
post Aug 4 2010, 03:38 PM
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I'm pretty sure Toto and Twi are always looking for each other. Oh! *sudden idea* Heh, heh, heh...>3>

So, the other day I was thinking about this story right before I read the new chapter. I was thinking, "Lawlz, I has blue hair. Hmm...blue hair...where have I read something about hair before...? Ohhhh!!!" And then I remembered, my favorite book, Fire! The girl has red hair. Not red like Chicken or Twi's hair. I mean like bright, bright, bright red hair. Hence her name, Fire. It looks like fire. Anyway, that made me happy. :D
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Oscar
post Aug 5 2010, 12:31 AM
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ZBoy: Hahaha! Thanks and yeah, a lot of people do die and more will. >.>


Zen: See, you're like Fire, only Blue.
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Christopher
post Aug 5 2010, 12:49 AM
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New chapter up soon?

I sure hope so.
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Oscar
post Aug 5 2010, 01:34 AM
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Enjoy! Did it earlier today.


Chapter 12- The Beginning


Totoro, Twi and Jason had reached the Riesgo gate, but stopped to find a small girl with long black hair veiling her face. She wore a small golden necklace that had the name "Charmy" spelled out on a tag.

"The boss sent me to stop you three from leaving. Name's Charmy. Now just because I'm a little girl doesn't mean I can't do much. I can do more than you think!" Charmy raised her hand and lifted Twi in the air.

"You see, I have psychic powers. This is why I'm so valuable to the boss." Charmy then swung her hand down, causing Twi to fall face first into the dirt.

Charmy then lifted both of her hands, making Jason and Totoro go up into the air. Charmy would twirl her hands and her victims would twirl with them. She spun them in circles, backwards, forwards and all around. Charmy grew bored and dropped them to the ground.

"You evil little girl, wait until I get my hands on you," Jason stood up and ran after Charmy, but Charmy stuck out her hand in a stopping motion and Jason became motionless.

"Ha ha ha! You think you can stop me? What powers do you have?" Charmy giggled.

Charmy was to busy laughing at Jason to notice Twi sneaking up behind her. Twi pulled up her left sleeve, revealing a metal hand, and punched Charmy right in the head, causing her to lose consciousness.

"Twi! You have a robotic hand?" Totoro yelled back surprised.

"Yeah, yeah, no time to talk; we gotta get out of here before this freaky girl wakes up!" Twi punched in the code and ran out with Jason and Totoro following behind.

Once in the South Land the trio reached a forest to rest up in. But they all knew the real reason why they were there; Jason was losing energy and becoming weak.

"Well, it's been about two hours. I think I'll give you two some room," Twi walked away.

Totoro and Jason sat down next to each other under a huge oak tree.

"Thanks for saving me, Totoro. I thought I'd never get out of there." Jason smiled back at Totoro.

"Of course, Jason. I would wake up every morning think about yo-" Totoro stopped and stared at Jason. She began to cry.

"I'm sorry, Totoro! I should have been with you a long time ago! I was so stupid. Now that I can see my death in plain sight, I realize how much of my life I wasted not being with you. I love you so much, Totoro." Jason hugged Totoro as tightly as he could.

"You do?! I love you, too, Jason! I always have. My whole life I have dreamed of this moment." Totoro began to wipe her tears.

"You gotta promise to let me go now, Totoro. I don't want you waking up every morning crying for me. I want you to be happy." Jason tried to smile back at Totoro.

The two then reached out their heads to one another and kissed a long, passionate kiss to make up for the years of not being together. After the kiss, Jason fell back onto the ground as his heart slowly began to stop beating. A single tear fell from his cheek and Totoro looked down at Jason with sadness, the entire scene stopped in time along with Jason's pulse.

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An exhausted looking woman ran into Nayome, screaming for help. Zen saw the woman and ran to her side as she fell to the ground.

"Are you okay?!" Zen tried to lift up the girl.

"Please...take this. It holds the answer to stopping Saffy. You don't have much...much...time. Please, Hasfusel's death must not be in vain." the woman handed Zen a blueprint. Zen grabbed it and before she could respond, she noticed that the woman had stopped breathing. She had died from thirst, hunger and extreme exhaustion.

"Oh my! Who is this?!" Eliza screamed.

"Go get help, Eliza! Run!" Zen yelled.

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The sun began to rise in the South Land and Zen was waiting for Cocoa to come out of her house so she could show her the blueprint. Cocoa was a very intelligent person. Suddenly, a young, skinny, brown-haired girl opened the front door and was surprised to see Zen there.

"Err, hi, Zen. What do you want?" Cocoa bitterly asked. Cocoa had been going from family-to-family in her younger years (though she was still quite young, but old enough to not need guardians anymore) and had never found the right home for her. No family ever seemed to love her and because of this, she was always quite bitter, but very strong.

"I need you to check this over. I believe this shows the machine Saffy has been building for years! I think this is what he plans to use to defeat us." Zen eagerly handed the blueprint to her.

"So? What do you want me to do with this?" Cocoa took the blueprint and rolled her eyes.

"You're a genius! You can figure anything out. I believe there must be something in here that tells us how to stop this crazy machine," Zen told Cocoa.

"Hmm..well, wait, there is something." Cocoa pointed to the paper. "Yes, there's a very big flaw here. I guess you could destroy this machine easily and all you gotta do is use a magnet." Cocoa now smiled, a rare sight.

"A magnet?!" Zen looked surprised.

"Yeah, this thing runs on spherium. If you stick a big enough magnet in the power source, then it'll cause the spherium to crumble, rendering the machine powerless." Cocoa said with her eyes closed.

"Great! If only I still had my chunk of spherium. TBR has no doubt already given it to Saffy and our days are already numbered...that traitor..." Zen talked to herself.
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post Aug 5 2010, 03:17 AM
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*mutters about people making her post places* -_-

You killed Jason. Do I get the asian guy with the fast car now? D; But yes, lovely story.
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Zen Clarke
post Aug 5 2010, 03:32 AM
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Oh how quickly she turns when there's an Asian and car involved. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Great chapter, Oscar.
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Oscar
post Aug 5 2010, 05:02 AM
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Totoro: (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Sorry, wanted you to read your part! Well, I'm afraid that Asian guy was killed long ago, sorry.

Zen: Thanks!! I like this chapter.
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post Aug 5 2010, 07:13 AM
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It's fun when your name is mentioned. But ooh, telekenises. I'm a creepy black-haired girl. <3
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