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Christopher
post Jul 28 2010, 09:39 AM
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No problem man.
I tend to notice that the next chapter isn't usually posted until 1:00 or 2:00 my time.
So, I just stay up till then :P
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Oscar
post Jul 29 2010, 04:55 AM
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No chapter tonight, as well. Feeling sick and gonna hit the hay earlier. Sorry guys and Chris. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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Zen Clarke
post Jul 29 2010, 05:12 AM
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Are you saying Chris isn't a guy? Jkkkkkk. It's fine, we know you aren't feeling well. Hope you feel better in the morning.
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Oscar
post Jul 30 2010, 06:12 AM
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Zen: Haha! No, of course not. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Well here's the continuation...


Chapter 8- The Future


"Ha ha ha! Oh, you don't know why I really want to kill you, Cassie, do you?" Olivia smiled back at Cassie who was worried to death.

"Why? I told you, I'm not Zen! We're going to burn in here! Both of us!" Cassie yelled looking around the ring of fire and the burning red roses.

"I'm not worried. But what I really want is Saffy to love me! I can't have there be more pretty girls out there, ya know. I AM THE PRETTIEST! Do you hear me?! Ha ha! Prettier than all of you. Any girl that thinks she is better than me, dies." Olivia picked up a red rose and squeezed it as hard as she could with her hand. Blood began to drip down her palm from the thorns of the rose. "Got it? He he hee."

"You're crazy!" Cassie said as she began to walk back.

Olivia used her whip to grab Cassie by the arm and spun her to the floor. She then grabbed Cassie's extremely long hair and pulled it back.

"I'm gonna burn your hair! Or better: I'm gonna rip it out from your scalp and then put it on me! Ha ha, hee! I will be so pretty." Olivia began to pull Cassie's hair even harder.

Cassie noticed the whip lying on the ground. She picked it up and whipped Olivia on her back. Olivia let go of Cassie's hair and fell back in extreme pain. Cassie stood up and noticed that the tip of the whip had caught on fire; the ring of flames was getting closer and closer to them. Olivia jumped up and slapped Cassie in the face. She then took her whip back and began chocking Cassie.

"Won't you say I'm pretty, Cassie? Say it! I want it to be your last words, ha ha ha!" Olivia grinned as she tightly held the whip around Cassie's neck.

"...No!" Cassie managed to say and kicked Olivia in the stomach.
Oliva fell back, out of air.

Cassie noticed the circle shrinking. She yelled for help and out of nowhere, part of the circle disappeared and in its place was Oscar with an extinguisher.

Cassie ran out and she looked back as the fired closed in on Olivia.

"Aaaa! Ha ha ha! I can take this!" Oliva screamed as she scratched her face, causing it to bleed. Olivia caught on fire and cried out in pain. Yelling that she was the prettiest girl in the world and that Saffy would marry her one day.

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"Sorry, HMR, the boss wants you dead for letting Mizuki get away." Chris said as he pointed a gun to HMR's face.

"You can't do this, Chris! We're friends! Why are we listening to Saffy, anyways? He's the one going to the rule the world, not us! Why do we do this for him? He hates us. And he hates humans that have any robotic parts even more. He hates you, Chris." HMR silently told Chris as he stared at the gun.

"Look, I would rather be on the winning side then the losing side, okay? And Saffy wants a body bag." Chris got ready to fire.

"No! How do you know we're on the winning side? But fine. Shoot me. See how much Saffy will take care of you in the future." HMR began to shed a tear. He stared down at the ground and awaited his death.

BANG!

Chris pulled the trigger, but he shot another guard standing nearby in the prison.

"Look, the boss wants a body bag, okay? I'll give him a body bag. I can't believe I'm listening to you, HMR. Maybe there's more for us and maybe it's not here in Riesgo." Chris put down the gun and stuck out his hand to HMR.

"Thank you, Chris. This means a lot." HMR shook Chris' hand.

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As soon as Cassie and Oscar had finished extinguishing the fire from the flower field, they saw a blue-haired girl walking towards them.

"Zen!" Oscar yelled and ran out to her.

"Hey, Oscar! I'm back!" Zen hugged Oscar and they quickly sat down on the field. Cassie came running to join them.

"Where were you? Are you okay?" Cassie said as she sat down next to Zen.

"Yes, yes. I'm fine. Tolby took me, but, well, he's gone now and I'm safe. That's all that matters." Zen happily said, as she stretched out across the field.

"Where's Crystal?" Zen asked.

"She went to prison for the murder of Darth, Zen. I know you two were friends. But they found her purple laser in his room and Darth dead." Cassie sadly told Zen.

"What?! No way! Crystal would never do such a thing!" Zen began shaking her head in disagreement.

"My goodness! My field! What happened?!" Dani said. She came running down the hill with Orie on her head.

"Uhh, yeah, well there was this girl, a crazy girl, and she kind of tried to kill Cassie. But she's dead now." Oscar explained to Dani.

Dani pulled her hair. "Well, as long as this won't happen again. Anyways, Zen! I'm glad you're here! Orie had his full moon vision!"

"Dani, this isn't a good time for your octopus and his fake stories." Zen rolled her eyes.

"This isn't fake! He always tells the truth!" Dani exclaimed.

"Orie said that you are going to die the day of the eclipse, Zen" Dani looked back at the three frozen faces.

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Crystal Talian
post Jul 30 2010, 06:16 AM
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Ah~!

I've been framed. )'=

Zen's always on my side, though. :D
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Oscar
post Jul 30 2010, 06:18 AM
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Haha, we haven't seen the last of you, Crystal. You'll be back. :) And will they ever discover that TBR is really working for Saffy?!
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Daniella
post Jul 30 2010, 06:33 AM
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I hope you guys cleaned up Olivia's ashes too. D;


Orie <3
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Oscar
post Jul 30 2010, 06:40 AM
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I was actually gonna have her get up and start trying to kill Zen, but I thought that'd be too much. >.> Yes, she's gone.
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Christopher
post Jul 30 2010, 06:01 PM
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HMR and Chris forming a third army, possibly?
It'd Zen's team, Saffy's team, and HMR + Chris team.
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Oscar
post Jul 30 2010, 09:38 PM
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(IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Yes, you can be the third group, haha! But I don't think there's gonna be one. But now you two are starting to dislike Saffy.
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Zen Clarke
post Jul 31 2010, 12:20 AM
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QUOTE (Crystal Talian @ Jul 30 2010, 01:16 AM) *
Ah~!

I've been framed. )'=

Zen's always on my side, though. :D

Of course I am! Usually. >,> Jk. 8D

._. Well crap. *prepares Last Will and Testement*
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Saffy
post Jul 31 2010, 12:21 AM
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What's Zen have to worry about? Saf's a nice guy?
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Zen Clarke
post Jul 31 2010, 12:39 AM
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QUOTE (Oscar @ Jul 30 2010, 01:12 AM) *
"Orie said that you are going to die the day of the eclipse, Zen" Dani looked back at the three frozen faces.

That's what Zen has to worry about.
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Oscar
post Jul 31 2010, 06:53 AM
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Get ready to find out Saffy's secret!


Chapter 9- Love and Loathe


Chris ran into Saffy's throne room yelling.

"Boss! We have intruders! Both are women. One is named Pippa and the other Rebecca. That's all I could gather. Would you like me to take care of them for you?"

"No. Katie and I will take care of them. Just like we used to in the old days. The time when Riesgo was starting out." Saffy said as he opened up a drawer taking out a pink revolver and a dark blue one.

"Oh my! You've kept those this whole entire time, Saffy?!" Katie said as she walked over to take her pink revolver.

"Of course, Katie. It was a great reminder of the olden days. But let's go make some new memories, okay?" Saffy smiled back at Katie.

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Katie and Saffy made it to the main entrance of the enormous honeycomb building, the same building where Saffy lived. They had heard the intruders were within the building, but were unsure where exactly. They figured that the intruders would try and break into Saffy's room to see what top secret information they would find.

Once Katie and Saffy reached the hallway leading to Saffy's room, they saw the two intruders trying to open Saffy's door with a hair pin.

"So, here you guys are!" Saffy yelled to the intruders.

"Why, if it isn't Saffy. We should be honored that the boss has personally come up to kill us," a blonde haired girl smirked. She was wearing all pink, even the hair pin she was using to open the door was a bright pink.

"Well, we shouldn't consider ourselves too lucky, Pippa," a shorter woman said. She had light brown hair and wore dark sunglasses.

"Oh, Rebecca, it's still an honor. You know, I've known the boss since he was a kid." Pippa told Rebecca as she pulled out a knife.

Pippa ran to Saffy with the knife, but Saffy simply kicked Pippa's hand, making the knife fly out into the hallway.

"That's it? That's your weapon? It's a miracle you two got this far. Katie, shoot her." Saffy said in a cold voice as he grabbed Pippa by the hands.

"But, this goes against everything I believe in. I don't even know why I agreed to come here." Katie looked at the revolver and was ready to drop it on the floor when Rebecca came running towards Katie, punching her in her face and knocking her down.

Katie immediately stood up and shot Rebecca on her leg and then proceeded to shoot Pippa in the chest.

"Good job, Katie! See, this is the real you. Not that peace-loving hippy." Saffy said as he let Pippa die on the floor.

"Hmm, I think we could use another cook now that Hasfusel's dead. Let Rebecca take his place." Saffy walked toward Katie picking her up and smiling.

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Later that evening, Saffy and Katie rested in Saffy's room. They talked about their past and how they had always been great friends. Katie scooted over closer to Saffy and smiled.

"Saffy, I love you." Katie stared back at Saffy's big, blue eyes.

"...Katie. I don't love you; I can't love you." Saffy said and stood up.

"Katie, I'm not who you think I am. I am not a person that is meant to be loved." Saffy finished as he took off his shirt.

"You see, this is where the human heart would be, but no, I'm not human. I have this battery where a heart is supposed to be. Katie, I am a robot. The only thing that I have that is human is my brain. That's where I get my personality, likes, dislikes and emotions from. This skin is synthetic, my hair is fake and my eyes are nothing but glass." Saffy was now staring directly at Katie.

Katie could see Saffy's honeycomb shaped battery, it was giving off a dim blue light. It was the only robotic-looking thing Katie could find on Saffy's body. To her, he seemed so human.

"What?! How...how did this happen?" Katie began crying.

"Ten years ago I was in a horrible car accident. They only managed to save my brain. The rest is gone. But my family insisted that I stay alive and so they had me built back. It was a horrible surprise. I hate myself. I hate that instead of blood, I have electric wires running through me!" Saffy was now starting to scream.

"You see, I don't want to ever love anyone. I don't want to ever think about my future with anyone! A robotic object like me has no future with anyone..." Saffy turned his back on Katie and put his shirt back on.

Katie stood up from the couch and stared out the enormous wall of windows Saffy had in his room. She ran. Katie ran right into the windows and out into the night. She fell, her blonde hair glimmering in the moonlight and her tears falling with her.

Saffy ran to the window and he caught a last look at Katie, as she fell from the 105th floor of the honeycomb building.
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Toaster Boy
post Jul 31 2010, 07:11 AM
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Okay, killing yourself over Saffy being a robot. Makes sense.
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Oscar
post Jul 31 2010, 07:14 AM
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Haha! Well, she also killed herself cuz Saffy refuses to love Katie.
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Charmy
post Jul 31 2010, 07:18 AM
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Oh, am I showing up any time soon? I'd just like to know when, don't boot me up because I said this or anything. >3>;
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Oscar
post Jul 31 2010, 07:58 AM
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I actually have just now reached the point where I had the chapters figured out. Now I gotta rethink what happenes next. I already know how it's gonna end, but not sure how to get there. I think you'll appear in one of the next three chapters. Probably not the next one, though. But you'll appear! Stick with Riesgo.
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Toaster Boy
post Jul 31 2010, 08:00 AM
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Well, it's not like he's TRYING not to love her, he's incapable. I just think dying over that is silly.
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Charmy
post Jul 31 2010, 08:05 AM
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Cool~

And I agree that Katie's actions were crazy. D':
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