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Jul 26 2010, 06:03 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Haha, actually, Olivia is going to go head-to-head with Chicken. :O I've ruined the surprise!
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Jul 26 2010, 06:15 PM
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#82
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Lightning Bolt Action Group: Gophers Joined: 4-March 07 |
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Jul 26 2010, 06:17 PM
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It's your world now. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-January 07 |
Chicken and Olivia will share the same body with two heads?
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Jul 26 2010, 06:27 PM
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Retired Superhero Group: Veterans Joined: 6-September 09 |
I kept seeing this thread, but I didn't know what it was so I didn't click on it. When I actually noticed it was a fanfic, I knew I had to read it! This aleady has that sense of epicness, and I can't wait for more! ^_^
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Jul 26 2010, 06:45 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Saffy: (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) No! That'd be horrible. But their heads will collide.
ZBoy: Glad you like it! I hope you didn't just read the first post, cuz I've forgotten to add the past two chapters to it. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) There's more! |
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Jul 26 2010, 06:47 PM
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Retired Superhero Group: Veterans Joined: 6-September 09 |
You mean there are other chapters posted throughout the topic!? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalagrin.gif)
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Jul 26 2010, 06:49 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
(IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Yes, ZBoy, go to the first post, the rest are there now. And I just accidentally deleted chapter 1. -_-; Goodbye introduction...
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Jul 26 2010, 09:40 PM
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An artist of many sorts Group: Veterans Joined: 16-October 09 |
I can't believe I've been missing THIS MUCH awesomeness!
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Jul 27 2010, 06:13 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Chapter 7- Death and Flames
Zen woke up to the rumble of a waterfall and the pain in her head. She had remembered that Tolby had thrown a smoke bomb and then that she had been struck by something right in the back of her head. Zen was now hanging on a tree branch, her feet dangling in the middle of a chasm and her arms tied to the top of the branch. "Ahh, you're awake! Excellent. You get to witness me killing you. How exciting!" Tolby laughed out loud. Tolby finished sharpening his sword and walked towards Zen, but she knew that if she started swinging then Tolby would have a harder time getting her or would get annoyed quickly. She began to swing back and forth as if she were on a swing. "Stop that!" Tolby yelled and put his hands around Zen's left foot. That's exactly what she wanted to happen. She then thrusted her left foot forward and Tolby slipped off of the edge and was now holding on to Zen's foot as he dangled in the air. "You evil woman! I know you're going to try and kick me down. And you'll do it. But remember this: you won't ever stop the Boss." Tolby then began to laugh an evil laugh as Zen kicked Tolby in the face with her right foot. Tolby fell down into the deep chasm, his laugh echoing in the darkness. ---- Oscar had assembled the entire city of Nayome for an emergency meeting. "I'm going to find Zen and I need some help; I can't do this alone!" Oscar looked at all of the citizens, some didn't even look back and others began to leave. "Totoro! You are looking for your sister, no? If you come with me we might also stumble across her!" Oscar shouted out to Totoro. "No, Oscar. I do not think she's anywhere where you'll be going. She's at Riesgo; I just know it. I have dreams of her being there. I also dream of saving Jason from his cruel transformation..." Totoro shouted back while playing with her teddy bear hair pin. "I'll go with you, Oscar!" a voice shouted. "Cassie?! Alright! Thank you." Oscar smiled back at Cassie. "Do we have anymore volunteers?" Nobody spoke up and Oscar knew that Cassie would be the only one to join him. Oscar and Cassie gathered up some supplies and they headed out of Nayome, not looking back, disappointed that nobody wanted to help. They set out to look for Zen. ----- "Hassy, don't you dare think you're going to escape this time!" Chris shouted to Hasfusel as he and HMR chased after him and his wife, Mizuki. Hasfusel and Mizuki had managed to sneak into Saffy's office and take the blueprints for Saffy's top secret machine. They had found within the blueprints the secret to destroying the machine, but knew they couldn't do it on their own. They were off to get more help. "Hey, Hassy, check out this new little feature on my arm." Chris pushed down a small button on his robotic wrist and his arm flew ten feet straight into the air, hitting Hasfusel in his back. "Gaauh! Mizuki! Take the blueprints and go!" Hasfusel cried out in pain. "No, I can't leave without you!" Mizuki ran to Hasfusel and was about to pick him up when Chris' arm flung right into her face. But it had hit her on her metallic left-side of her face. Chris and HMR reached Hasfusel. HMR pulled out his harpoon gun and pointed it to Hasfusel's heart. "Alright, HMR, today you become a man! Kill him." Chris told HMR with an eager look in his eyes. "I...I don't thi-...think I can, Chris. I've never killed anyone, can't we just take him back to his cell?" HMR started to walk back. "No! He escaped from the cell with his wife! He needs to be killed." Chris grabbed the harpoon gun from HMR and fired it straight into Hasfusel's heart. The blueprint Hasfusel was holding was taken by the wind and glided over to Mizuki who had witnessed Chris killing Hasfusel. She grabbed the blueprints and ran straight to the gate, she had the passcode to open the doors, she knew she had to find help. "She's getting away, HMR! Fire the other harpoon, now!" Chris yelled at HMR. HMR's hands began to shake as he pointed the gun to Mizuki's back. He couldn't keep the gun steady and fired the last harpoon, but it had completely missed Mizuki. Mizuki reached the gate, entered the code and medal door opened. She ran inside to the hallway within the gate. She ran all the way to the other door, the door leading to South Land. She entered the code and she was free. ---- Oscar and Cassie were walking in Dani's flower field when they saw a woman standing in the middle of the red roses. She had brown her and fiery red eyes. She wore a red dress and had bright red lipstick on. "So, this is Zen?" the woman said pointing to Cassie. "Umm, no, this is Cassie. Who are you?" Oscar asked. The woman brought out a whip and grabbed Oscar's legs and threw him far into the air. He landed unconscious on the ground far from the woman and Cassie. The red-loving woman walked towards Cassie and threw a small circular device next to her feet. The device, that looked like a one-inch unicycle began to mark a big circle around Cassie and the strange woman. After the device closed in the circle, the tracks it had made burst into flames that towered way above the two women. The roses began to burn. "I'm Olivia, nice to meet you, hee hee, ha ha ha!" the woman cackled. |
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Jul 27 2010, 01:19 PM
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It's your world now. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-January 07 |
How can Zen not be the true villain here? Look at her!
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Jul 27 2010, 04:00 PM
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I leave you alone for TWO minutes! Group: Veterans Joined: 27-November 08 |
I actually have done that sort of kick thing before. Where after the person grabs your foot, you kind of lunge it at them. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Eh...don't ask. >->
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Jul 27 2010, 04:01 PM
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Lightning Bolt Action Group: Gophers Joined: 4-March 07 |
I sure hope HMR is going to get his punishment for letting Mizuki escape, correct?
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Jul 27 2010, 06:21 PM
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Member Group: Forest Spirit Joined: 13-July 08 |
You know Oscar, the real reason I won't go with you to find Zen is because you don't bathe. I just made up that stuff about Twi and Jason so I wouldn't hurt your feelings.
Anyway, I like the story so far. =] |
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Jul 27 2010, 07:28 PM
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I leave you alone for TWO minutes! Group: Veterans Joined: 27-November 08 |
Oscar, I told you that if you took more showers you'd have more friends.
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Jul 27 2010, 07:30 PM
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It's your world now. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-January 07 |
Perhaps where Oscar comes from water is scarce, so he avoids taking so many showers. Come on people, you need to learn to accept other cultures more.
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Jul 27 2010, 07:46 PM
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Bigger. Better. Toaster. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-March 07 |
Look at these people without empathy and compassion, we're definitely the good guys.
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Jul 27 2010, 08:52 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Zen: I hope you didn't kick someone into a chasm!
Chris: Hmm, I didn't think I'd need him punished, but I just might add that... Totoro: Hahaha! We are miners! We are supposed to be dirty! I was just dirtier cuz I found the spherium deep inside! I'm clean now, lolz. Zen: Impossible! I'm squeaky clean. *squeaks* Or listen to Saffy. Our cultures are quite different, haha. TB: Yes, you guys at least say goodnight when you kill someone. XD |
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Jul 27 2010, 08:57 PM
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I leave you alone for TWO minutes! Group: Veterans Joined: 27-November 08 |
No, no, I kicked him in his...nevermind. >->
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Jul 27 2010, 08:58 PM
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It's your world now. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-January 07 |
We're gentlemen and show a little class in the work we do.
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Jul 27 2010, 09:20 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Hahaha, Zen! Why?! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
Yes, you guys also don't leave any traces behind, Saffy. |
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