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Jul 24 2010, 05:57 PM
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Veteran Trash Can Diver Group: Raccoons Joined: 23-July 07 |
Awesome it looks like I'm Saffy's side kick. Plus I can control huge machinary, sweet (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
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Jul 24 2010, 11:04 PM
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#62
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor Joined: 16-July 08 |
Dude. I totally forget who Pudge is.
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Jul 25 2010, 02:09 AM
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#63
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Because I said so. Group: Chicken Joined: 8-March 07 |
Ahhhhh! That explains your questioning. Thank you for making my hair neat. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
I like it. Saffy being the naughty is quite amusing. |
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Jul 25 2010, 05:53 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
HMR: Yeah, you're a helicopter pilot!
Chicken: Stick around cuz you're in a big fight scene with another member. An old friend. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) *goes to finish other chapter* |
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Jul 25 2010, 06:49 AM
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#65
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Lightning Bolt Action Group: Gophers Joined: 4-March 07 |
Next chapter to be posted NAO?! :O
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Jul 25 2010, 06:53 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Chapter 5- Nothing Is What It Seems
HMR flew the helicopter down to the outskirts of Pudge. Saffy got off and gestured to HMR to stay and leave the helicopter running. Saffy went into the only bar in the village of Pudge. To his surprise he found the girl he was looking for, Katie, standing at the counter. "Hello, Katie, remember me?" Saffy politely smiled and put out his hand to Katie. "Saffy?! What are you doing here?! Get out. I told you that I never wanted to see you again." Katie said and crossed her arms and turned away from Saffy. "But Katie, I need you by my side, please. Come back?" Saffy walked closer to Katie. "No! I told you why I left, already. You were letting your power get to your head; you were cruel. The way you killed people without even thinking twice about it; it was horrible. And your hate for anybody that is part robot is even more cruel. These people that are helping you are part robot and you still despise them?! That makes no sense!" Katie finished. "I told you, once somebody gets some robotic attachment they are no longer humans. They are a disgrace to the race." Saffy explained Katie with a stern face. "I can't believe you. They're a disgrace? You're lucky I'm not part robot if not you'd hate me." Katie walked away. "Fine! But I wanted to tell you that I needed you and that I miss you, Katie. You know where I live if you want to come back." Saffy finished and left the bar. ----- Zen had the Spherium sitting in her bedroom; she didn't know what to do with it. She needed the perfect hiding spot. After hours of thinking she knew just what to do with it. Zen opened a floor board in her bedroom and stuck it in there. She placed an old rug over the floor to hide the floor board. "Hey, Zen," a yawing boy said from the doorway. "Oh my God! TBR! It's you!" Zen ran over to TBR and hugged him. "Yeah, I'm back. See, I came out before you and Crystal and just went on swimming down. I also went exploring around South Land after I climbed out of the river. You know I'm a lone wolf." TBR told Zen. "Ha ha! I'm glad you're back, is all. Does everyone else know?" Zen asked. "Yeah, they do. But Nayome isn't my hometown, so nobody really knows me; Crystal told them about me, though." TBR replied. Zen and TBR walked outside to find Darth, the local store manager, giving some sort of speech to the citizens of Nayome. "Who says we can trust this man? He hasn't even told us where he's from. Crystal and Zen even found it odd that he vanished. But he supposedly came out before them from Riesgo? How are we to believe this?! The wall of Riesgo is about half a mile thick; I'm sure Crystal and Zen couldn't have been too far behind. All I'm saying is that he may not be what he seems, friends." Darth spoke to the public. "Hey! I'm a good guy!" TBR yelled from behind the crowd. "I am from the town of Pudge, okay? And I did come out before Crystal and Zen because I swam out of there as fast as I could; I didn't want to get caught by Saffy's goons! I explored the land for a day because that is what I do, I explore. Now, I'm going to bed because I am extremely tired." TBR defended himself against Darth's claims. TBR joined back with Zen and they both walked toward the city's hotel. On the way Zen explained to TBR about Saffy's machine and that they had the last bit of Spherium Saffy needed to power it up. "Now don't tell anyone else. So far only the Tri-Hunters, Crystal and you know." Zen whispered to TBR. "I wont, come on, I'm better then that, Zen." TBR smiled back. ----- "Boss, we have someone here to see you." HMR interrupted Saffy's nap. "Who is it?! This better be go-" Saffy could not finish, because he had froze the minute he saw who was there. "Hello, Saffy. You know, I don't know why I'm here, but I guess I just can't stay away from ya." Katie winked back at Saffy. "I am so happy you're here! HMR, give us a moment and you, Katie, come here!" Saffy beckoned. Saffy and Katie hugged each other tightly to make up for the three years they had been apart. The fight that sent Katie to the South Land had to do with Saffy's deep hate for anybody that was part robot. ----- The night was cool. Darth was getting ready for bed. He took off his red cap and hung it next to his door for convenient access in the morning. He turned off the lights, put his glasses in the drawer beside his bed and shut his eyes. Suddenly, his bedroom door squeaked open. Darth immediately opened his eyes to see a man standing in the doorway. "Hello, Darth," the man said. "Who is there?! How did you get in here?" Darth was panicking and was reaching for his glasses. He put them on and he clearly saw who it was. The man brought out a knife and held it up; it shined in the moonlight. "TBR...I know why you're here. I've exposed you and you just can't have that, can you?" Darth said with a slight crackle in his voice. "Goodnight, Darth." TBR thrusted the knife into Darth's heart. Before TBR left the breathless body lying in the blood-covered sheets, he put a purple laser that looked like a pen near the bedroom door. |
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Jul 25 2010, 08:09 AM
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Lightning Bolt Action Group: Gophers Joined: 4-March 07 |
Saffy hates me because I'm part robot? D:
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Jul 25 2010, 08:11 AM
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor Joined: 16-July 08 |
No acknowledgement at all that Darth just died. Yep.
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Jul 25 2010, 02:33 PM
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It's your world now. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-January 07 |
So TBR is the villain for killing Darth? Super-Shocker!
Also, yay Katie love :D |
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Jul 25 2010, 04:01 PM
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Bigger. Better. Toaster. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-March 07 |
So I'm a good guy and Darth was trying to get me killed? What a shocker!
Also, I'm pretty sure I'm working for Saffy if I'm a villian. |
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Jul 25 2010, 04:40 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Chris: Yeah, Saffy does hate you. He only likes 100% humans.
Charmy: Haha, you're right! But he is dead. Saffy: it would seem so. There will be more Katie love! TB: (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Darn Darth! You might be working for someone else. Or not. |
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Jul 25 2010, 10:44 PM
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Lightning Bolt Action Group: Gophers Joined: 4-March 07 |
So Saffy is just using me?
That's not very nice :( |
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Jul 26 2010, 06:04 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Chris: Yes, you are being used, sort of. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)
*** Chapter 6- The Receivers "Yes, Saffy, Zen knows about Spherium. Would you like me to go search her house?" TBR was talking with Saffy through phone. "No! You might get caught and then we'll lose those idiot's trust. I'm going to send in the Receivers to eliminate the problem." Saffy responded. "But Saffy, I won't get caught. Please, I can do a goo-" "I said no, TBR. I'm not taking any chances. Don't get in the way of the Receivers, either." Saffy cut off TBR and hung up immediately. "Katie, can I get my contact book right there?" Saffy smiled to Katie. "Of course. The receivers are dangerous people, ya know. I kind of don't want you using them, but hey, I don't want you to lose, Saffy!" Katie grabbed the contact book and opened it up, highlighted the Receiver's phone line and gave it to Saffy. "Thank you my Katie" Saffy said and happily began dialing the number. "Hello? Tolby? I have a job for you, Noviwan and Olivia." ------ Zen was out on the hill outside of Nayome wondering what she could do to stop Saffy. She was surprised nobody really wanted to do anything. She knew that it was up to her to convince the people of South Land that they had to fight back. The citizens had already fought back other years, but she felt that they were missing something in all those other wars that followed after the Great War. "Are you lost, little girl?" a deep voice said from behind. "Umm, no, who are you?" Zen looked back at the tall man. He was wearing all black and had big spiky black hair that looked like sharp knives. sticking out of his scalp. His eyes were also a deep black. "My name is Tolby. I'm one of the Receivers. You see, we receive a mission and then we finish it. That's where we get our names. And our mission this time is to kill a girl named 'Zen'. Might you know her by any chance?" Tolby asked as his pupils dilated and his hands began to fidget. "Yes, I am her." Zen got up. She knew she was in for a fight. "Ha! You think you can handle me? Please, you won't last a minute." Tolby confidently said. Tolby kicked Zen in the face sending her down to the ground. He grabbed her up by her blue hair and brought out a long blade from his back. He was about to whirl it down to Zen's neck, but Zen managed to kick Tolby in the legs, making him fall to the ground along with his blade. Zen jumped on top of Tolby and punched him straight in the nose. She reached for Tolby's sword, but before her hands could touch it Tolby sent Zen flying into the air with both of his legs. "Wow, you're a little stronger than I thought. But you're only still a weak little girl." Tolby laughed at Zen. Tolby picked up his blade and ran at Zen at full speed. Zen jumped out of the way just in time, but Tolby quickly stopped and turned around. He began to slash the air in the direction of Zen. Zen kept inching back more and more as Tolby's sword got closer and closer. Suddenly, Tolby was hit on the back of his head with a rock. "Hey! Leave her alone!" Oscar, one of the members from the Tri-Hunters, yelled. Oscar had many more rocks and kept lunging them towards Tolby, most of them hitting him. "Oh, my orders are only to kill Zen, but I won't mind killing you. First, let me finish Zen off." Tolby flung his sword to Zen, but Oscar saw that coming and threw a rock hitting the sword before it could reach Zen's stomach. Zen ran and picked up the sword off of the ground and rand towards Tolby, slashing him right in the stomach. "Aaaa! You crazy woman, how dare you hurt me!" Tolby was barely able to speak from the pain. Tolby grabbed the sharp side of the sword from Zen and pulled it away from her, cutting a big part of his hand. He flung the sword in the air and caught the handle. He attempted to slash Zen's neck, but missed and slashed part of her cheek. "What's going on over here?" EB, the mayor, said as he ran over to the three. "Ha ha ha! This isn't over. You'll all die." Tolby reached into his pocked and threw a smoke bomb onto the floor sending a cloud of black smoke around everyone. After the smoke disappeared, Tolby was gone and so was Zen. "Zen?! Where are you?!" Oscar yelled, but it was too late, Zen was nowhere in sight. Tolby had taken her. |
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Jul 26 2010, 08:49 AM
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#74
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Lightning Bolt Action Group: Gophers Joined: 4-March 07 |
I love how Olivia is somehow in this story lol
Ahhh. I haven't been in like, 3 chapters. Poop on you. |
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Jul 26 2010, 01:28 PM
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Bigger. Better. Toaster. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-March 07 |
Yeah, I'm working for Saffy, I knew it.
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Jul 26 2010, 02:43 PM
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I leave you alone for TWO minutes! Group: Veterans Joined: 27-November 08 |
Ha! I beat up Tolby! xP
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Jul 26 2010, 03:02 PM
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Bigger. Better. Toaster. Group: Veterans Joined: 16-March 07 |
Saffy and I are the good guys in this story.
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Jul 26 2010, 03:04 PM
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It's your world now. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-January 07 |
That Zen is still alive? I get it; she's the real bad guy who won't die until the story ends. Good going.
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Jul 26 2010, 05:04 PM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Chris: I think you'll be in the next one. So will HMR.
Zen: Yeah, lol, but he's still alive and he's got you. Saffy and TB: Yes, you guys are very good. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Close Saffy.. |
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Jul 26 2010, 05:47 PM
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Lightning Bolt Action Group: Gophers Joined: 4-March 07 |
I think Olivia should give Zen a lecture about how unlady-like she is.
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