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Oscar
post Jul 23 2010, 07:34 AM
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Sure, haha. I know when that can happen. ;)
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Christopher
post Jul 23 2010, 07:35 AM
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QUOTE (Oscar @ Jul 23 2010, 02:23 AM) *
Chris: Haha, yes, you did. Doubt Hasfusel will ever even read that. But that's what you do; you "persuade" people.


It's super-effective!

You know what would suck?
If the rebels somehow reprogrammed me and I had to fight on their side D:
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Oscar
post Jul 23 2010, 07:39 AM
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Haha, that won't happen! You stay with the bad guys all the way through.
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Christopher
post Jul 23 2010, 07:43 AM
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Es lebe Riesgo!

Oh, you should of made me extendo punch Has instead lol
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Oscar
post Jul 23 2010, 07:46 AM
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Alright, I'll give you the ability to extendo punch someone sometime.
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Christopher
post Jul 23 2010, 07:49 AM
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Fufufuu
Why thank ya pardner ;)
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Toaster Boy
post Jul 23 2010, 01:29 PM
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So I went missing, did I? Odd.
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Saffy
post Jul 23 2010, 02:17 PM
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I'm rather enjoying this story. Saffy's doing a great deed for this world :]
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Zen Clarke
post Jul 23 2010, 02:30 PM
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Gah! My back's sore. I think it's because Jason just got done stabbing me in the back. </3
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Charmy
post Jul 24 2010, 01:34 AM
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I'd just like to comment that I don't comment much for stories. But I am reading it. ^-^
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Oscar
post Jul 24 2010, 02:18 AM
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TB: Yeah, but you'll be back right away. Keep reading cuz you're gonna do something big...

Saffy: Lolz, yes, you even give people jobs!

Zen: Haha, he has no choice. He needs that antidote.

Charmy: I'm glad! I hope others are doing the same. Thanks for telling me. Next chapter will be up late tonight.
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Zen Clarke
post Jul 24 2010, 02:21 AM
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Yeah, well if he thinks he's getting anything from me on our anniversary now, he is mistaken.
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Oscar
post Jul 24 2010, 06:27 AM
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Chapter 4- Spherium

Crystal and Zen waved goodbye to Dani as they headed down the hill towards the city of Nayome.

"Bye, Dani! Thanks for letting us sleep over; we were wayyyy tired," Zen said as she skipped across the flower field stopping to smell the roses.

"Of course, I love having people over. And don't forget that there's a full moon in two days! Orie will be giving a prediction then." Dani yelled back.

"Err, yeah, we'll be sure to stop by...maybe," Crystal said quietly, still skeptical about an octopus telling the future.

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Zen and Crystal reached the Nayome gate, which was always opened. Nayome was not the typical city you would picture when you do think of a city. It wasn't as big, there were not tall buildings, only small adobe houses. There was no paved roads for the small amount of automobiles they even had and it was located in the heart of a valley.

"It can't be?! Crystal? Zen!? We thought you had been killed or something, Zen! Same with you, Crystal! Are you all okay? I have to go tell everyone you guys are back. But who do I tell first? Oh this is a happy day!" a small girl said as she began to run around in circles.

"There's good old Eliza," Zen smiled.

Once Eliza told the entire city of Crystal and Zen's arrival, everyone came to see them. Cassie the butcher, Pippa the history teacher, EB the mayor, Darth the local store manager and many more citizens that lived around the area. They all gathered to hear Zen and Crystal's story of how they escaped Riesgo and how Zen had gone undercover pretending to be a Riesgo citizen in order to be Saffy's assistant to gather confidential information. They also found out about a young boy, TBR, who did not make it back with them.

"Crystal, I watched Ken while you were gone." Cassie said as she called Crystal's cat over to her. Cassie had unusually long red hair; it went all the way down to her knees, but it was so well kempt, that it even shined in the sunlight. Her face was also very well maintained that it made her look like a porcelain doll.

"My goodness! Ken! I missed you so much. Thank you, Cassie." Crystal picked up Ken and squeezed him as tight as she could.

After everybody had welcomed the two returning citizens, Zen walked over to the old mine to meet with a group of miners traveling across South Land looking for gold or other valuable minerals. Zen came up to the mine and to her surprise, the three strangers were sitting down talking.

"Hi! I'm Zen, you guys must be the Tri-Hunters?" Zen said as she walked over to the team.
A girl with bright green eyes stood up, took off her helmet and let her blonde hair hang down. She wore all green and had a small pink clip with a teddy bear on her hair.

"Hello, I'm Totoro, the leader of the Tri-Hunters. This is O-" Totoro was caught off by one of the other team members.

"I am Oscar, nice to meet you, Zen!" Oscar said with a smile. He had long, messy brown hair and it looked even messier with clumps of dirt sitting on top. His face was also muddy and it matched the color of his brown eyes.

"And I am ZBoy. Well, that's my nickname. I'm actually called Eddie, but I like ZBoy better." ZBoy said. ZBoy was the tallest of the three. He had brown hair that hung down to his shoulders and it was also full of dirt, like Oscar's hair. His face was clean, however, and his eyes were a deep blue.

"Alright, so what do you want me to do with this, Totoro?" Oscar brought up a smooth spherical stone that shined a radiant silver.

"I think we might be able to sell it fo-," Totoro was caught off again, but this time by Zen.

"That's Spherium! That is the rarest mineral in the world and nobody has found that big of a size since 100 years ago or something! This is amazing, but also very dangerous. You see, I found out that Saffy is using this mineral to power up his top-secret machine. He plans to use that machine to take over the South Land. I know this, because I was working as his assistant, but only to find out this kind of info, of course." Zen exclaimed and began walking over to Oscar, she could barely breathe now.

"Holy cow! I bet this thing would sell for a bunch, huh? But I'm thinking now we can't let anybody know?" Oscar told Zen and Zen nodded in agreement.

"Saffy only needs one more piece to power up his machine. I'm afraid if he were to get his hands on this, then South Land would be in its final days." Zen frowned with a look of worry on her face.

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"Boss, wasn't it obvious that Zen was not really a Riesgo citizen? I mean, she hardly knew the area and you said you had caught her snooping around your throne room and drawers multiple times," HMR, another of Saffy's goons said. HMR was completely human, unlike Chris.

"I knew Zen was not a Riesgo citizen since day one. I hired her because I liked her. She made me laugh the minute she introduced herself to me. I figured she was trying to run away from the South Land. But then I caught her reading through my files. I was gonna send her to the guillotine or something right there and then, but she apologized so sweetly. But I'm afraid she might know too much now. Why did I wait so long to do anything?" Saffy sighed, but immediately smiled.

"HMR! Is the helicopter ready? I gotta go to Pudge and visit an old friend of mine." Saffy got up and ran out of the throne room before HMR could even finish.

"Uhh...yes, boss, it's ready." HMR responded to the empty room.

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Crystal Talian
post Jul 24 2010, 06:33 AM
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Of course. Crystal expresses her joy at seeing her cat again by squeezing him to death. =3 Poor Ken. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)

Very good, Oscar!
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Oscar
post Jul 24 2010, 06:45 AM
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That shooed be "tightly" I need to reread! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif)

Haha, yeah, of course! What better way to show your love? Thank ya!
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Christopher
post Jul 24 2010, 10:35 AM
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Can I have the ability to shoot lasers out of one of my fingers?! :O
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Saffy
post Jul 24 2010, 01:46 PM
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That Zen is really becoming quite the villain. Somehow her charms have worked on me :|
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Katie
post Jul 24 2010, 01:53 PM
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It should be known that Pudgy is quite pleased to be included, if only by name, in this tale. :o
Oh, he says he wishes to type sowejnrkbh dffffffffffffffffffffffffffnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnf43i33

His joy is obvious. :D
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Zen Clarke
post Jul 24 2010, 05:26 PM
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QUOTE (Saffy @ Jul 24 2010, 08:46 AM) *
That Zen is really becoming quite the villain. Somehow her charms have worked on me :|

;] Oh, please, Saffy. We all know that you're so easily manipulated by me.
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Oscar
post Jul 24 2010, 05:55 PM
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Chris: (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Haha, no, I'm afraid that can't happen. But you still get your extendo punch!


Saffy: Yeah, her charms managed to keep her from dying, lolz.


Katie: Good! The town was actually named something else at first, but I thought "Pudge" would just be better.

Haha, Zen!

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