 Mizuko and Charmy's story competition., :P Fun. |
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 Oct 12 2009, 01:06 AM
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It can't get much worse. Group: Veterans Joined: 25-February 08  |
The new one is kinda short but it's a neet idea. I think it's alright. No clue who did it.
EDIT: I don't mean any offence to whoever wrote it I'm just giving what I thought. |
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Oct 12 2009, 01:18 AM
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Charrcharrs Group: Site Contributor  Joined: 16-July 08 |
Any opinions on the other stories?
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Oct 12 2009, 01:21 AM
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Melted Wings of Wax Group: Global Moderators  Joined: 22-January 08 |
I think the fifth entry is boring. I just don't see what any one means by it being funny. I guess we all have different tastes. I don't mean to offend whoever wrote it. I'm sorry if I did. =[
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Oct 12 2009, 01:23 AM
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It can't get much worse. Group: Veterans Joined: 25-February 08 |
I am reading over some of them. I like number 6 is my favorite so far. The others I am gonna need more free time to read.
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Oct 12 2009, 01:47 AM
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be like a cloud Group: Veterans Joined: 6-March 07 |
#2 & #4 are really well written. But they're also long, so I, with my ridiculously short attention span, have trouble reading the whole things. :'/ I also definitely know who they're written by. >:D
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Oct 12 2009, 02:33 AM
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Member Group: Veterans Joined: 13-August 09 |
Okay, my current standpoints.
#1 - Good idea, could have been executed a little better. I don't really enjoy the format. #2 - ;D <the writer> I think wanted to do more but had to keep it short/censored. The death scene I think could have been more graphic... ;] #3 - Good idea, done well, liked the use of actual forum members. #4 - AWESOME, but it drags in some parts. #5 - Its funny, but not really in my taste. =/ #6 - I can see where the person was going with this, not too shabby. #7 - Interesting concept, but the lack of dialogue and its length take away from it. I am guessing this person drew the "No Face" thing from Spirited Away? |
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Oct 12 2009, 02:51 AM
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Charmy + ZBoy + Mizuko = Phat man phanplet phighters! Group: Veterans Joined: 17-September 09 |
Such a hard choice. Charmy does mizuko have to vote. Mizuko love them all! And I'm trying really hard to get my story in by the end of the day!
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Oct 12 2009, 03:19 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
So far it's lookin' good! I'm most excited to read Mizuko's story! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) Hurry up!
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Oct 12 2009, 03:20 AM
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Charmy + ZBoy + Mizuko = Phat man phanplet phighters! Group: Veterans Joined: 17-September 09 |
Haha mizuko will try but mizuko has to change some stuff!
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Oct 12 2009, 03:24 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Okaaay, but I want to read it before I go to sleep.
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Oct 12 2009, 03:30 AM
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Charmy + ZBoy + Mizuko = Phat man phanplet phighters! Group: Veterans Joined: 17-September 09 |
Well then what time is it where you are? I will make sure I get it done before then! *Thumbs up*
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Oct 12 2009, 03:35 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
It is 9:35pm, uhh try to have it in an hour? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) I sound bossy though. Just get it in when you can!
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Oct 12 2009, 03:38 AM
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Charmy + ZBoy + Mizuko = Phat man phanplet phighters! Group: Veterans Joined: 17-September 09 |
An hour it is! *types like crazy* FUN!FUN!
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Oct 12 2009, 03:39 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Woohoo! I can't wait. I have a feeling your story is going to win the funniest medal, for sure!
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Oct 12 2009, 03:43 AM
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Charmy + ZBoy + Mizuko = Phat man phanplet phighters! Group: Veterans Joined: 17-September 09 |
Nah not if mizuko tries to be funny! I will just act normal and it might turn out funny!
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Oct 12 2009, 04:34 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Yes! Just be yourself!! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) I know it'll turn out funny. It's gonna be so obvious it's yours.
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Oct 12 2009, 04:50 AM
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Charmy + ZBoy + Mizuko = Phat man phanplet phighters! Group: Veterans Joined: 17-September 09 |
It really isn't funny at all you will be surprised but it's okay I guess well I have to be going now toodleoo
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Oct 12 2009, 04:50 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
See ya, Mizuko! You DO need sleep. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalaexdee.gif) *waits for Charmy*
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Oct 12 2009, 04:59 AM
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Retired Superhero Group: Veterans Joined: 6-September 09 |
I love how this is supposed to be annonymous, yet where all going to know which one is Mizuko's! :D
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Oct 12 2009, 05:13 AM
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Respawn Group: Oscar Joined: 12-August 08 |
Yeah, I know! It's coming up pretty soon!
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