Vines ~ Chapter 1, {RFF Fanfic with a twist} |
Vines ~ Chapter 1, {RFF Fanfic with a twist} |
Apr 13 2009, 02:18 AM
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Member Group: Members Joined: 9-April 09 |
~Updates Chapter 1 is done. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/darth-toot.gif) ~Chapter 1
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Apr 13 2009, 02:20 AM
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08 |
thats pretty good Iris. Just try to add more detail, { I had that problem to! }
Keep on working (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalasmile.gif) |
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Apr 13 2009, 02:25 AM
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[[.scg.]] Group: Veterans Joined: 23-March 09 |
It's very good. It's a mini-chapter (like you said), but it's good. Keep writing :).
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Apr 13 2009, 02:45 AM
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I don't remember selling my soul to you. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-March 09 |
My Ragunas to ripped to get beaten up...
And good jorb. |
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Apr 13 2009, 03:17 AM
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Member Group: Members Joined: 9-April 09 |
The mini chapter is now a full chapter. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/emot-kraken.gif)
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Apr 13 2009, 03:30 AM
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I don't remember selling my soul to you. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-March 09 |
................ /:
........ I didnt really like that at all to be honest..... D: |
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Apr 13 2009, 03:33 AM
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Member Group: Members Joined: 9-April 09 |
................ /: ........ I didnt really like that at all to be honest..... D: Well it will get better I guess. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalasad.gif) |
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Apr 13 2009, 03:36 AM
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I don't remember selling my soul to you. Group: Veterans Joined: 13-March 09 |
I didnt like that you killed Raguna... Thats all...
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Apr 13 2009, 03:42 AM
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Member Group: Members Joined: 9-April 09 |
Well he will make an appearance somewhere later in the story somehow
I wanted to try using it from a girl's perspective Crap... how do you change the topic title? |
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Apr 27 2009, 11:35 PM
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whatever Group: Veterans Joined: 19-December 08 |
I like it,the twist is fine. Keep writing!!!
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