Abstracted, My manga ^-^ Options

[Charmy]

(IMG:http://i525.photobucket.com/albums/cc331/princess_of_melody/Graphics/Abstracted.jpg)
Made by me

Abstracted is a comic about 5 girls who attend a school called Karison high school. They go through ordeals such as a lazy-butt teacher who has a grudge against one of her top students, wars between Yr7 students and Yr 8 students, a guy named Derek who has a major lame crush on a perfection-obsessed girl, a tall blonde who manages to squeeze an average mark in class, a big-haired Aussie who is just trying to let go of the past, a cute little girl who is trying to kiss the boy of her dreams and a funky girl who's got a big bust.

(IMG:http://i525.photobucket.com/albums/cc331/princess_of_melody/Graphics/Characters.jpg)
Made by me

Erisu "Errie" Karusaki
13
Being a smart child for her age, Erisu skipped Yr 3, and now is in Yr 8 at the age of 13. Erisu is a fast worker and a great student, although, she dislikes the idea of school entirely and would prefer to stay at home, but, how would that get her anywhere in life?
Erisu "Lives" With her parents Kaguma and Jiisu.


Nalia Davidson
14
A bookworm who can have a few blonde moments, and can easily get distracted.
She is a slow worker at school and gets low grades. The only class she enjoys is DAT and reading lessons.
Nalia moved from Scottland at age seven with her mum Malsa, dad, Adarek and 15 year old brother Calson.
Nalia's family also owns a cat named Dawn.

Sarika Lara
14
An average student at Karison highschool, Sarika enjoys school.
Sarika is a mood-swinger who will turn from shy and sweet to a boy to an outrageous bully.
Sarika cares for her younger brother Tororo, and her parents Jolan and Tasikai.

Maiya Scolnick
12
A short student who fails at sport. This girl-in-buns is a superstitious-cry baby who doesn't like the colour red.
Maiya can change from tears to smiles instantly when she sees her love Noah.
Maiya lives with her twin sister, Freyja and 18 year old brother Tom. They don't get to go out of the boundaries because of their strict over-protective parents Saskia and John. They have a pet chihuahua Lucky and cat Ellie.

Chrisy Kents
14
Chrisy obeys the class rules and does well at school.
Chrisy is outgoing, flirty, a pinch full of herself and is easily jealous of. Still, she's a popular student at the school and is constantly chased by guys. But her boyfriend is Mat in year twelve.
Chrisy is a cousin of Sarika, and since her parents are having trouble at home she's come over to stay for a while again. She pokes fun at Sarika and is easily bugged by her being such a "Boy".

Other characters

Derek Pekowski
A full-of-himself guy who normally gets in detention for talking in class too much. But when he gets over himself he can seem shy and not quite a bad guy. But that will take a while for Erisu to see, along with getting over his bad hair.

Hannah Ethengown
The kids favourite teachers, not Erisu's though. Ms. Ethengown is a nightmare for Erisu. She could get her on a weekly detention for answering a question.

AnnaBelle McIntosh
One of Maiya's friends. She prefers to figure things out maturely than Maiya's crazy end-of-the-world way. She sometimes hangs out with Maiya when there sitting altogether in the "Awesometastical and Mega-Awesome Area of Quietness".

Noah Bridge
Noah is Maiya's unfortunate crush. His cool, nice and collected but feels awkward by Maiya's strange behaviour when he's near her.

Oscar Murray
Oscar, in year eight, takes his time to work at the library and see Nalia borrowing her books. His a kind guy who takes a liking to Nalia and her choice of books.

Mat Partridgeman
Chrisy's hot boyfriend. Mat is the popular guy.... All the way up to year 12. He enjoys hanging with his friends and showing off his girlfriend. He isn't all about popularity though.

These are characters that myself and my friends made up. This comic consists of our ideas being plotted together to create a comedic comic.

Manga;

Not all the scans are perfect, and I apologise. Don't beat me up. ;__;

Chapter 1; 5 Freinds
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Pg 23 < Bad language
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Okay, so, please, I beg you. Do not copy these ideas. They are owned by me and my friends and one of their brothers (I suppose). I've put a lot of effort in the pictures (Eh.... Most) and I would be very disappointed to see them copied somewhere else. Otherwise, I hope you have fun reading the comic.

[Tolby]

*copies* Mvuahahahahahahahahaha

[Charmy]

Oh, thanks Tolby, you warm my heart.
What makes it so funny for me is the movie I was watching just went "Muahahahaha" the same time I read you post XDDD

[Lenyo]

Looks very nice and official. Chalk one up to Charmy.

[Charmy]

Hey guys, I'm having trouble uploading my comic to Photobucket. At first the image was a JPEG, but it didn't show up on the list, then I changed it to a PNG, when it starts to load that's all it does, load. Should I try another image-y thing of is their something wrong with it?

[Horcrux]

Maybe it's just a big file and may take longer to upload. Anyways,nice job Charmy,looking forward to seeing it.

[Lenyo]

If your willing to join deviantart. You could put it there easily.

[Horcrux]

People steal from DevantArt all the time,on photobucket you can lock your album. Anyways you could also use imageshack if photobucket isn't working for 'ya.

[hmbabe]

I knooow I get s mad when I post something there and then I see it on another site where the person said they made it ughhh

[Charmy]

Mm'kay, ImageShack seems to work.... Kinda. This is the best I can do for now, so, sorry for the problems.

EDIT: BTW, since I'm re-doing the speechbubbles, it'll take longer for me to post them up. Like, I only have 5 pages down and I still have about 7 more to do....

[Jitterbug]

I LUF your manga, Charmy! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/emot-iia.png) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smilie-iil.gif) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smilie_iim.gif) I thought it looked real nice and your drawings are AWESOME!!!! I wanted to start a manga myself but unfortunately I don't have a scanner and would just be able to take pictures of the pages....

[Horcrux]

Awww Charmy these are SOOOO AWESOME! The drawings are extremely good and bubbles are fine! Oh and the script is neat and funny. Good job. Can't wait for more. :D

[Jitterbug]

I also thought you did a good job with the humor in this manga. It made me giggle. ^_^

[Charmy]

I feel a little less stressed now, glad you liked it ^-^ I still have a bunch of pages, so, check back often.

[Lenyo]

Whoas! Sorry I didnt look earlier!
I really liked it! But page four is blank... Maybe its my dsi.

Gah! Why is everyone in the world a better artist than me?

[Charmy]

Pg 4 is there, so somethings wrong with you :P

Oh, I swear your not that bad!

Also, I'm about to add the fifth character, but not introduce D: I have to check a few more things with my friends before I do. So, some of her profile might be a bit blank.

[Lenyo]

Lol, the first drawing I put effort into is SO embarrasing.
Cant wait to see where this story goes!

[showchoirgirl]

Charmy, you are a great artist! And the storyline is awesome, too!

[Jitterbug]

I feel a little less stressed now, glad you liked it ^-^ I still have a bunch of pages, so, check back often.

Don't feel stressed. ^_^ This is YOUR manga and we won't demand you to hurry up with it or anything. Take your time and have fun making it~

[Charmy]

GRR, I speech bubbled 3 pages but when ImageShack is done "Downloading" nothing shows up! UGH, what's happening now?

And thanx for all the compliments! ^-^