 Withering, hm fanfic (ToT) |
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 Feb 19 2009, 12:51 AM
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08  |
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4873584/1/Withering
I am not the best writer around so I would like to know what you guys think! Thank you!!!! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalasmile.gif) |
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Feb 19 2009, 01:43 AM
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Member Group: Veterans Joined: 13-February 09 |
mmkay, I left you a somewhat lengthy review on fanfic.
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Feb 19 2009, 01:54 AM
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08 |
thank you!
in general my grammar is horrible! I stink in english class and well I'm from the country and yea hopefully the more I write the better I will get |
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Feb 19 2009, 08:46 PM
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Member Group: Veterans Joined: 13-February 09 |
yea, with practice you will get better!
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Apr 13 2009, 05:12 AM
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Member Group: Members Joined: 9-April 09 |
Can you continue this? I think you should make the chapters a little longer but other than that I liked it.
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Apr 13 2009, 05:22 AM
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I r back from teh dead :3 Group: Veterans Joined: 22-February 08 |
alright I guess I'll continue it (IMG:style_emoticons/default/lalasmile.gif) I am getting better at writing
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