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post Apr 4 2009, 09:58 AM
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Abstracted is a comic about 5 girls who attend a school called Karison high school. They go through ordeals such as a lazy-butt teacher who has a grudge against one of her top students, wars between Yr7 students and Yr 8 students, a guy named Derek who has a major lame crush on a perfection-obsessed girl, a tall blonde who manages to squeeze an average mark in class, a big-haired Aussie who is just trying to let go of the past, a cute little girl who is trying to kiss the boy of her dreams and a funky girl who's got a big bust.



Erisu "Errie" Karusaki
13
Being a smart child for her age, Erisu skipped Yr 3, and now is in Yr 8 at the age of 13. Erisu is a fast worker and a great student, although, she dislikes the idea of school entirely and would prefer to stay at home, but, how would that get her anywhere in life?
Erisu "Lives" With her parents Kaguma and Jiisu.


Nalia Davidson
14
A bookworm who can have a few blonde moments, and can easily get distracted.
She is a slow worker at school and gets low grades. The only class she enjoys is DAT and reading lessons.
Nalia moved from Scottland at age seven with her mum Malsa, dad, Adarek and 15 year old brother Calson.
Nalia's family also owns a cat named Dawn.

Sarika Lara
14
An average student at Karison highschool, Sarika enjoys school.
Sarika is a mood-swinger who will turn from shy and sweet to a boy to an outrageous bully.
Sarika cares for her younger brother Tororo, and her parents Jolan and Tasikai.

Maiya Scolnick
12
A short student who fails at sport. This girl-in-buns is a superstitious-cry baby who doesn't like the colour red.
Maiya can change from tears to smiles instantly when she sees her love Noah.
Maiya lives with her twin sister, Freyja and 18 year old brother Tom. They don't get to go out of the boundaries because of their strict over-protective parents Saskia and John. They have a pet chihuahua Lucky and cat Ellie.

Chrisy Kents
14
Chrisy obeys the class rules and does well at school.
Chrisy is outgoing, flirty, a pinch full of herself and is easily jealous of. Still, she's a popular student at the school and is constantly chased by guys. But her boyfriend is Mat in year twelve.
Chrisy is a cousin of Sarika, and since her parents are having trouble at home she's come over to stay for a while again. She pokes fun at Sarika and is easily bugged by her being such a "Boy".

Other characters

Derek Pekowski
A full-of-himself guy who normally gets in detention for talking in class too much. But when he gets over himself he can seem shy and not quite a bad guy. But that will take a while for Erisu to see, along with getting over his bad hair.

Hannah Ethengown
The kids favourite teachers, not Erisu's though. Ms. Ethengown is a nightmare for Erisu. She could get her on a weekly detention for answering a question.

AnnaBelle McIntosh
One of Maiya's friends. She prefers to figure things out maturely than Maiya's crazy end-of-the-world way. She sometimes hangs out with Maiya when there sitting altogether in the "Awesometastical and Mega-Awesome Area of Quietness".

Noah Bridge
Noah is Maiya's unfortunate crush. His cool, nice and collected but feels awkward by Maiya's strange behaviour when he's near her.

Oscar Murray
Oscar, in year eight, takes his time to work at the library and see Nalia borrowing her books. His a kind guy who takes a liking to Nalia and her choice of books.

Mat Partridgeman
Chrisy's hot boyfriend. Mat is the popular guy.... All the way up to year 12. He enjoys hanging with his friends and showing off his girlfriend. He isn't all about popularity though.

These are characters that myself and my friends made up. This comic consists of our ideas being plotted together to create a comedic comic.

Manga;

Not all the scans are perfect, and I apologise. Don't beat me up. ;__;

Chapter 1; 5 Freinds
Pg 1
Pg 2
Pg 3
Pg 4
Pg 5
Pg 6
Pg 7
Pg 8
Pg 9
Pg 10
Pg 11
Pg 12
Pg 13
Pg 14
Pg 15
Pg 16
Pg 17
Pg 18
Pg 19
Pg 20
Pg 21
Pg 22
Pg 23 < Bad language
Pg 24
Pg 25
Pg 26
Pg 27
Pg 28
Pg 29
Pg 30
Pg 31
Pg 32
Pg 33
Pg 34
Pg 35
Pg 36
Pg 37
Pg 38
Pg 39
Pg 40



Okay, so, please, I beg you. Do not copy these ideas. They are owned by me and my friends and one of their brothers (I suppose). I've put a lot of effort in the pictures (Eh.... Most) and I would be very disappointed to see them copied somewhere else. Otherwise, I hope you have fun reading the comic.
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- Charmy   Abstracted   Apr 4 2009, 09:58 AM
- - Tolby   *copies* Mvuahahahahahahahahaha   Apr 4 2009, 10:01 AM
- - Charmy   Oh, thanks Tolby, you warm my heart. What makes it...   Apr 4 2009, 10:10 AM
- - Lenyo   Looks very nice and official. Chalk one up to Char...   Apr 5 2009, 05:02 AM
- - Charmy   Hey guys, I'm having trouble uploading my comi...   Apr 5 2009, 05:59 AM
|- - ImMarryedToAWitchPrincess   Maybe it's just a big file and may take longer...   Apr 5 2009, 03:48 PM
- - Lenyo   If your willing to join deviantart. You could put ...   Apr 5 2009, 05:05 PM
|- - ImMarryedToAWitchPrincess   People steal from DevantArt all the time,on photob...   Apr 5 2009, 09:24 PM
- - hmbabe   I knooow I get s mad when I post something there a...   Apr 5 2009, 10:29 PM
- - Charmy   Mm'kay, ImageShack seems to work.... Kinda. Th...   Apr 6 2009, 06:09 AM
- - Jitterbug   I LUF your manga, Charmy! I thought it ...   Apr 6 2009, 04:27 PM
|- - ImMarryedToAWitchPrincess   Awww Charmy these are SOOOO AWESOME! The drawi...   Apr 6 2009, 07:11 PM
- - Jitterbug   I also thought you did a good job with the humor i...   Apr 6 2009, 07:19 PM
- - Charmy   I feel a little less stressed now, glad you liked ...   Apr 7 2009, 05:57 AM
|- - Jitterbug   QUOTE (Charmy @ Apr 6 2009, 10:57 PM) I f...   Apr 7 2009, 11:23 PM
- - Lenyo   Whoas! Sorry I didnt look earlier! I reall...   Apr 7 2009, 06:12 AM
- - Charmy   Pg 4 is there, so somethings wrong with you :P Oh...   Apr 7 2009, 06:22 AM
- - Lenyo   Lol, the first drawing I put effort into is SO emb...   Apr 7 2009, 06:33 AM
- - showchoirgirl   Charmy, you are a great artist! And the storyl...   Apr 7 2009, 08:47 PM
- - Charmy   GRR, I speech bubbled 3 pages but when ImageShack ...   Apr 9 2009, 07:57 AM
- - sarah_chase_4ever   Maybe it just didn't show up? Try logging off ...   Apr 9 2009, 05:51 PM
- - Lenyo   Chalk another one up! Uh oh... We're runni...   Apr 9 2009, 07:28 PM
- - Hasfusel   Inneresting. Funky artwork, story has potential. W...   Apr 9 2009, 09:49 PM
- - Charmy   Thanx everyone, comments make me want to draw more...   Apr 10 2009, 05:22 AM
- - Lenyo   Heres something I'll criticize. You spelled cr...   Apr 10 2009, 06:51 AM
- - Charmy   I'm an Aussie, it's with an big, fat S her...   Apr 11 2009, 11:48 PM
- - Jitterbug   What's an Aussie? Is that where you're fro...   Apr 11 2009, 11:58 PM
- - Charmy   .... Well, sorry for a delay. No, there isn't...   Apr 17 2009, 12:54 AM
- - Tolby   I'm gonna write xiefography on peoples faces n...   Apr 17 2009, 06:32 PM
- - Hasfusel   Good idea, but why? Moar comix pleese. Get drawin...   Apr 18 2009, 12:00 PM
- - Charmy   New pages~ From 14-21 So, it gets medi-serious for...   Apr 24 2009, 01:42 AM
- - Hasfusel   Can the next page feature a harpoon incident of so...   Apr 24 2009, 06:31 PM
- - Charmy   Well, that all depends on.... What is a harpoon?   Apr 25 2009, 04:00 AM
- - Charmy   Someone post something motivational so I can stop ...   Apr 30 2009, 06:29 AM
- - showchoirgirl   Keep going. You're very good at this, but you ...   May 1 2009, 09:34 PM
- - sarah_chase_4ever   Hey Charmy are you still uploading? The story was ...   Jun 25 2009, 03:36 AM
- - Charmy   I was planning on "GIMPING" all of the r...   Jun 25 2009, 05:49 AM
- - Charmy   Bop! Pages 23-40 are all NEW! And same wi...   Jul 7 2009, 11:57 PM
- - Charmy   ///Triple posting. Soweh ;D Um, hey, is anyone st...   Aug 30 2009, 11:42 AM
- - mizuko   Whooooo for Charmy!!! Upload the part ...   Sep 20 2009, 04:09 AM


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