My Writings Options

[Aki-Chan]

I'm just going to put some short stories, songs, and poems I've written in here. I would really like opinions, and don't worry I don't mind constructive criticism.

I'll start off with a short(really short) story that I wrote last year, it is a pure comedy that was written out of boredom, and it's called-

The Sleep & Brained Deprived

In a normal park on a normal day two friends sat on a normal bench.
"I'm bored!" whined a boy with brown short hair, Brown eyes, Wearing a black baggy T-shirt and a pair of dark blue jeans.
"You’re always bored Jake." Said another boy uninterested, this boy had black hair, Brown eyes and was wearing a white shirt with a green clover on it, A ring with the letter R in graven on it, and tan pants.
"But Ryan today I'm even boreder the normal!" The boy called Jake shouted.
"Yeah that's nice. Oh and it's more bored not boreder." Said the other boy Ryan who seemed like he would rather be sleeping then talking.
"You’re so heartless! I'm going to stop being your friend if you don't do something to entertain me." Warned Jake wagging his finger in Ryan's face.
"Alright I'll do something."
"Really what?!"
"Come closer." Ryan said a smirk growing on his face as Jake did exactly as he told him.
"Okay do it." Jake said eagerly.
"I did."
"What? What do you mean you did?"
Leaning back against the bench Ryan explained "Well for that short while you were entertained."
"...Sometimes I really...Don't like you that much." Said Jake pouting.
"Yeah... Can I go home now?"
"No! As my friend you must suffer with me!"
"Your sooo caring" Ryan said sarcastically.
"Yes I am." Jake agreed smiling, completely missing the sarcasm.
"So what do we do now." Ryan asked after rolling his eyes at his friend’s stupidity.
"...I don't know. What do you want to do?"
"Sleep."
"Why are you so tired anyway?"
"Because it's 4:00 in the morning!"
Jake made no reply to this.
"Well don't you have anything to say?" Ryan asked.
After a moment of deep thought Jake replied "So that's why no one's here!"
"You sugar high moron!" Ryan yelled upset by his friend’s lack of common sense.

End

I'll probably post more tomorrow. "Probably" being the key word.