My Untitled Story, Who wants to help me! Options

[Charmy]

Well, who wants to help me make my story better or help me edit it. I know that sounds boring but it'll be funner than you think. Anyone can add in ideas but warning, I may not use 'em. So BEWARE!
Well, the story is like a show, it doesn't just doesn't focus on one person it focus on a couple, so don't get confused. I got my idea from Twilight's RPG (Thankyou!).
Now, it does get a bit creepy, before I add a creepy part to the story, like blood or dead bodies, try not to read if you don't wanna.
Now, this is also a place where you can just read my story and not help me (Dam you!) Anyway, here is the beginning part:



'Isn't it so beautiful...'
'Yeah.' Erin turns his head to his love. Capri is staring at the sky
clueless of it all. 'Capri...' Capri turns her head to Erin 'D-do you think...'
'Do I think what?'
'Do you think that... Anything co-could happen with...'
'With who?' Erin was slightly frustrated, and was finding it hard to speak. Capri was looking at him, wondering what he was going to say. Capri was halve-knee deep in the water while Erin was on the grass. He came forward to Capri. He looked at the sky when Capri was staring at him. 'Yes?'
Erin thinks about all the times when thet were little. They had been best friends from when they first met. He was hoping that he wouldn't destroy any of that.
'Do you think you could love me?' Capri looked out to the moon. Capri was silent, and Erin looked down into the water and watched her reflection. He had saw her walk over to him, he turned around to her. 'Do you?' Capri smiles and puts her hand on his cheek. She kissed him in the moonlight. They wrapped their arms around eachover and kissed. When their lips left eachover Capri said I do. Erin smiles, Capri smiles, they then walk off deeper in Kischt forest.



So, what do you think so far?

[Charmy]

Alone on the forums, bored, and don't want to leave. I'll try and think of something...



Jesse got fed up with the graveyard so he went to Silver Valley. In his invisibility.
Jesse walked around and looked at all the houses. Almost all the lights appeared to be off.
He passes one house. Jesse looked through the windows one house only to find Anastacia. He is shocked. He opens the door to the house slowly, it still creaked. He took small steps to her then sat infront of her. She seemed to be asleep. He looks around the house, seeing all his surroundings. They felt "Cosy", something Jesse has never felt before. He tiptoes upstairs hoping no one would hear him. He then see's a light on, how did he not see it through the windows? He stays right there making sure no one heard him. Jesse eavesdrops on the people in the room.
'I can't stop thinking of you...'
'I can't stop thinking of you either.' He looks hrough the door way and see's a girl and a boy there. 'I am very glad that I told you how I felt.'
'Me too.' They kept on talking about similer stuff until they both kissed. Jesse stopped looking then tiptoed away downstairs. As he is going down the stairs he see's Anastacia getting up. She puts her hand to her head and groans. Anastacia then gets up and looks around.
'Who is there?' She asks faintly. Jesse looks at her carefully. She then walks up in Jesse's direction. 'Hello?' She asks quietly. Jesse breathes dramatically unable to stop. Anastacia outs her hand forwards and it touches Jesse. He becomes visible. Anastacia then screams and hides downstairs. Capri and Erin come out of the room a mess looking around, they see a faint figure.
Erin runs up to it and see's a ghost. 'Get away, evil spirit!' Jesse runs downstairs and goes outside. Kiyoto comes out of her room and asks what is happening. 'A ghost.' Capri answers. Kiyoto gasps and asks where? Erin points infront of him. Capri goes down the stairs and asks for Anastacia. She doesn't come out. 'It's alright. Don't worry.' She then see's a head behind some furniture.
'What happened?' Capri asks. Anastacia just shivers and mumbles that she doesn't know. Capri sighs then helps her up. 'It's alright now. He's gone, there's no need to worry.' As Capri helps her up Anastaica looks around cautiously. She sighs when she gets back up on the couch. Everyone goes upstairs and Erin says he'll go home. Anastacia runs up to Capri asking if she could stay with her. Capri nods and they Anastacia stays in her room for the rest of the night.

Erin walks home looking around for anything dangerous and see's none. As he opens the door to his home he asks for his grandfather.
'What!?' He yells.
'...I'm home. Sorry I was out for so long.' Daniel says it's a good thing he wasn't here.
'I could do some time without you being around here. You vampire.' Erin turns a deadly stare to his grandfather.
'I am not a vampire!'
'Yes you are. You teeth show and your eyes are as dark as one!' Erin runs upstairs mad at his grandfather and wishes for his real parent so to come back. They have been gone for a long time now and havn't come back yet and left him with this ungrateful grandfather.
Daniel is shaking his head and whispers to himself you have to face with what you are.



Only thing I could think of.
I keep on saying that I am stuck then I think of something to write. Well, still no evil villain and the new character is going to come son. If you want me to use your ideas PM me and I'll think about it. Okay, I will now stop telling you to PM your ideas to me because you must think it is asnnoying.
I would love to hear your ideas, even if you think they are cruddy. I will think about the idea and I may consider using them. I will also thankyou (unless if ya don't wanna be) on here for your idea.