My Untitled Story, Who wants to help me! Options

[Charmy]

Well, who wants to help me make my story better or help me edit it. I know that sounds boring but it'll be funner than you think. Anyone can add in ideas but warning, I may not use 'em. So BEWARE!
Well, the story is like a show, it doesn't just doesn't focus on one person it focus on a couple, so don't get confused. I got my idea from Twilight's RPG (Thankyou!).
Now, it does get a bit creepy, before I add a creepy part to the story, like blood or dead bodies, try not to read if you don't wanna.
Now, this is also a place where you can just read my story and not help me (Dam you!) Anyway, here is the beginning part:



'Isn't it so beautiful...'
'Yeah.' Erin turns his head to his love. Capri is staring at the sky
clueless of it all. 'Capri...' Capri turns her head to Erin 'D-do you think...'
'Do I think what?'
'Do you think that... Anything co-could happen with...'
'With who?' Erin was slightly frustrated, and was finding it hard to speak. Capri was looking at him, wondering what he was going to say. Capri was halve-knee deep in the water while Erin was on the grass. He came forward to Capri. He looked at the sky when Capri was staring at him. 'Yes?'
Erin thinks about all the times when thet were little. They had been best friends from when they first met. He was hoping that he wouldn't destroy any of that.
'Do you think you could love me?' Capri looked out to the moon. Capri was silent, and Erin looked down into the water and watched her reflection. He had saw her walk over to him, he turned around to her. 'Do you?' Capri smiles and puts her hand on his cheek. She kissed him in the moonlight. They wrapped their arms around eachover and kissed. When their lips left eachover Capri said I do. Erin smiles, Capri smiles, they then walk off deeper in Kischt forest.



So, what do you think so far?

[Charmy]

Best I'm thinking of.



'Paige?' Paine asks while slowly walking upstairs. Paige is silent and says nothing. 'Everything will be alright, we still have eachover, right?' Paige still isn't uttering a word. When Paine asks for paige again she turns at him and gives him deadly eyes. 'Leave me alone.' She says seriously, Paine frowns then walks back downstairs. Paige gets up and locks the door. Paine hears it shut and shakes his head. He decides to go out for a while hoping that Paige calms down. As he walks through the dark he finds everything around him eerie, like as if its gonna jumo out at him. He see's one of his friends houses and decides to knock on the door, hoping that they were still awake. He hears footsteps, a very sleepy person opens the door and says hi Paine. 'Hi Fillie. Is Jona home?' Fillie nods then lets Paine in. Fillie then collapses on the floor and falls asleep, Paine chuckles.
'Oh, hello Paine.' There was Jona's mother, Annarissa. 'I'm so sorry to hear about your father.' Paine nods then asks to see Jona. Annrissa says yes.
'Jona?' Asks Paine. Some peppy girl then jumps up right infront of Paine. 'Hi! I'm sorry about your pa. Are you okay.'
'Yeah... I guess. Though, Paige is taking it a bit far I think...' Jona then puts a frown on her faces but then smiles again. 'I know what could make her feel better! Come with me.' Jona runs to her room, it was pink and had all types of stuffed toys and dolls. She then picks up a necklace from her box. It had a tear-shaped jewel hanging from a silver chain.
'Wow... It's beautiful.'
'Give it to her. I am sure she will love it!' Paine puts it in his pocket carefully and hugs Jona as a thanks. Paine goes back home and knocks on the bedroom door.
'What now!?' Asks Paige. She is frustrated with Paine constantly coming back.
'I have something to make you feel better.'
'Id don't want it!' Yells Paige. Paine says it'll be outside the door and goes back downstairs and sleeps on the floor wih a blanket wrapped around him.
Paige soon gets curious at what would be outside and slowly opens the door hoping her brother wasn't there. She was speechless at what was at the door. She picks it up and goes straight back into the bedroom. She examined it closely. 'It's so beautiful...' She puts it on and looks at herself in the mirror. She forgets about her father for now and is only thinking about the beautiful necklace.



Anyone have any ideas of what should be next? Except for the introduction about that one character (Not the villain, the one I mentioned earlier)
It can be anything, I am stuck for now and asking for help.
Please?