My Untitled Story, Who wants to help me! Options

[Charmy]

Well, who wants to help me make my story better or help me edit it. I know that sounds boring but it'll be funner than you think. Anyone can add in ideas but warning, I may not use 'em. So BEWARE!
Well, the story is like a show, it doesn't just doesn't focus on one person it focus on a couple, so don't get confused. I got my idea from Twilight's RPG (Thankyou!).
Now, it does get a bit creepy, before I add a creepy part to the story, like blood or dead bodies, try not to read if you don't wanna.
Now, this is also a place where you can just read my story and not help me (Dam you!) Anyway, here is the beginning part:



'Isn't it so beautiful...'
'Yeah.' Erin turns his head to his love. Capri is staring at the sky
clueless of it all. 'Capri...' Capri turns her head to Erin 'D-do you think...'
'Do I think what?'
'Do you think that... Anything co-could happen with...'
'With who?' Erin was slightly frustrated, and was finding it hard to speak. Capri was looking at him, wondering what he was going to say. Capri was halve-knee deep in the water while Erin was on the grass. He came forward to Capri. He looked at the sky when Capri was staring at him. 'Yes?'
Erin thinks about all the times when thet were little. They had been best friends from when they first met. He was hoping that he wouldn't destroy any of that.
'Do you think you could love me?' Capri looked out to the moon. Capri was silent, and Erin looked down into the water and watched her reflection. He had saw her walk over to him, he turned around to her. 'Do you?' Capri smiles and puts her hand on his cheek. She kissed him in the moonlight. They wrapped their arms around eachover and kissed. When their lips left eachover Capri said I do. Erin smiles, Capri smiles, they then walk off deeper in Kischt forest.



So, what do you think so far?

[Charmy]

Well, I wrote some more.



Kail washes the blood off himself and sighs. 'I wish I could've scared Juni more. Instead the pipsqueek had to run away!' The door downstairs then opens and Kail's smile begins to come back. He runs down stairs and picks up Juni. 'Hey, little brother!' He said, scratching his head.
Juni muffled words of let go and put me down. Kail walked upstairs and put Juni in his room.
Juni was incredibly scared of Kails room, it had pictures of vampires, blood fading off the walls, and no window for any sunlight.
'Now, you would like to stay in here, now wouldn't you?' Juni shakes his head but Kail locks the door. Juni looks around at all the awful things. He runs to the door and tries to open it. 'Kail! Let me out of here!'
Kail was eating some food and ignoring Juni's pleas.
'Kail!' Juni gave up then sat against the door with his eyes closed.
Kail had soon got bored and left the house, leaving Juni in his room. He walked outside and when to the lake again to see if all the blood was still there, in his disapointment there wasn't. He walked around the lake until he once got bored again and visited the graveyard to see if Jesse was there. 'Jess! You here? Or are you hiding.' He took a few steps until he once saw Jesse in the tree again. 'Hey Jess.' Jesse says nothing to him. Kail whistles. 'Jess?' Jesse turns his head and asks what. 'I'm bored, what can I do?'
'You don't have to come to me and ask what to do each time you are bored, you do know that?' Kail shakes his head then kicks some sticks while waiting for Jesse's answer. 'I don't know! Use your imagination for once.'
'You don't think I've tried?' Kail walks away and goes back home. He kicks Juni out of his room locks himself in.

Jayze and Ko were waiting for moonlight again, for it would be here very soon.
Jayze is looking around with no expression at all. 'Ko?' He asks. Ko looks at him. 'Can you help kill me?' Ko widenes his eyes and shakes no with his head. 'But, the only thing that is beautiful in this damned place is the moon. And it is the only thing that shows my true being.' Ko shakes his head again. Then he writes on some paper that he needs Jayze.
'How?' Ko writes down comfort, family until Jayze asks him to stop. 'Fine, I will stay, only for you.'
Ko smiles at Jayze then notices the moon outside. He taps Jayze and points to it. They ran outside and turned into wolves. Jayze once again stares out at the moon while Ko runs into the forest.
Ko howls, waiting for Daze. Where could she be? He runs to where Daze lives, there is a light on in the top room. He scratches on the door open that she would hear. But, she doesn't. Ko howls, hoping he doesn't get other people to come. He then hears some footsteps. Ko wags his tail. Daze opens the door and see's him. 'Oh, hello. Sorry, I forgot to come.' She smiles, they run off into the forest and enjoy their time together.



I don't know who the story should be about next, oh! And I still have to introduce one more character but I don't want to do her yet. And I still havn't got a proper evil villain.
Please PM me if you have any good ideas! :)