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post Jun 13 2012, 03:12 AM
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Prologue: The Road Not Taken

Part 1:

The place was such a mystery to the young girl in the orange jumper. She had never seen such a place before, the city was built of stone into the mountain side, the scenery was so beautiful and colourful for her curious eyes. This was the first vacation she had ever been on, she didn't know places like this existed before they arrived earlier in the day. Natsumi was from the city, her father was an office worker in one of the tall glass buildings and her mother worked in a small grocery store. Being that they were only a middle class family, this would probably be the only vacation they would ever take.
"You can go play in the sand if you want, Natsumi, just don't go far, your father and I are going to take a nap." her mother told her, the beach was just along the road from the town and it was vacant, even on such a beautiful day.
Natsumi, carrying her bucket and scoop went down the beach a little and sat down in the soft sand, she wiggled her hands and feet until they were under the cool sand, she sat staring out at the ocean for a while, listening to the seagulls and the waves. Feeling that she had just about had enough of sitting there she filled up her bucket with sand and started pouring it all into a pile.
"You're doing it wrong" came a voice from behind her, she jumped at it, not expecting company.
"Hey! You scared me! and no I'm not!" she said, stubborn. When she turned to scowl at whoever was talking she found herself staring up at a boy about her age. He had blonde hair and eyes as blue as the ocean behind her. "Who are you?" she asked. She hadn't seen any kids her age in town, a couple taller, probably older ones, but he looked right her age and height.
"Lemme show you" he said sitting down, he was wearing nice clothes, but he didn't seem to care that he was dirtying them when he took her bucket and filled it with water getting his pants wet. "Like this" he said throwing the water over her sand pile.
"Hey!" she said again complaining "I was... Oh" he had cupped sand up with his hands creating a square house in the sand. "wow!" she took to doing the exact same thing. The two sat in silence sculpting, his houses small and square while she built tall strait towers. Playing with the boy she forgot all about the time, and in building her towers she forgot all about the boy as they played in silence. When she finally looked up the sun was getting close to the water and the boy was gone.
"Hey.. H-hey..." she called a bit, he was gone. But where was he? Wasn't he there just a moment ago? She got up off her knees, she would find the boy, but which way did he go? Being that she hadn't seen him in town she headed out towards the fields, and the forests.
As she walked it got dark, and as the forest path disappeared without her noticing she became lost.

"HELLO!!" she called loudly "HEY! This isn't funny.." she said the last part more to herself, the forest was completely dark now. She would have to turn ba-- When she swung around to head back, she realized that she didn't know where back was. The forest had enveloped her without her knowledge. "Daddy says when your lost look at the stars" she said weakly looking towards the heavens, but there was no sky, only endless trees. "And Mommy says follow your heart..." she said weakly, not quite the right situation, but it was all she had.. So she started trudging back the way she thought she might have come, the forest never really changing, but she refused to cry, she didn't want to be so frightened that she would give up.
Finally something happened, she found a path, but this was certainly not the path she'd come from, this path was split into two directions.

In one direction she could see a softly glowing moss lighting the path, it was clinging against the side of a drop too high for her to climb onto. The light was welcoming, she could see that path better.

In the other direction there was a path of stones, smooth and flat perfect for walking on, but nothing like anything she'd seen in the town, the stones looked old, dirty and forgotten. The path was welcoming, though dark, someone had to have placed those rocks.

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Natsumi carefully stepped onto the rocks, then marched forward along the path, it was a bit before she couldn't see properly, but when she realised how dark it had become she slowed, even feeling the tiny cool taps of rain beginning she was nervous, pressing forward at a painfully slow pace. It only got worse from there, the rain became heavy and the sky cracked with the roars of the storm that had rolled over. The stones were becoming slippery and she was getting very frightened, storms were not her favourite thing. Adrenalin starting to make her chest hurt she picked up her pace until she was almost running, a big mistake because she couldn't see and it didn't take long for her to trip and fall.

The storm lit up the sky in her hazy consciousness, a figure hovered above her, black in the dim flash of the sky above her. The sky darkened again and she noticed faintly a white glow illuminating a dark face, then the glowing spread to a mark on their face, she barely was able to process it before her vision blurred and she lost consciousness again.

Natsumi sat up in bed, holding her head, her vision blurred her head reeling-- the nightmare again, but this dizziness wasn't normal-- "Oh.." she shook her head, it was the rocking of the little boat she was on that was making her head spin-- that's right she was on a barge heading for her new home-- She could hear the sky outside cracking and roaring with the oceans tides, it was rocking the boat dangerously-- she would have to think about it in the morning, her head was still spinning so she lay back into her cot and fell into a lucid sleep.

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Meanwhile, On Deck. --The map, destroyed by the water that had washed through the Captains quarters was causing quite an issue. He knew that he was on the right track, but with all of his equiptment damaged he would need to make a decision, if they were lucky they would hit the island, if not they would shoot past and be taken away from their destination. Under these conditions he would have to be careful. (Yes I know this part seems ridiculous but the choice that wins WILL effect the story.)

What should the Captain do? Continue North through the worst of the storm OR Angle North-East and avoid the head of the storm.

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post Nov 5 2012, 04:13 PM
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- Baby   A Ranch Story: Prologue Pt 1   Jun 13 2012, 03:12 AM
- - Mizukithepanda   I'm generally far more inclined to redheads, b...   Jun 13 2012, 03:16 AM
- - Baby   Doesn't have to be, it's the way the forum...   Jun 13 2012, 03:26 AM
- - sweetwitch   I love Toya : ) though I was torn between her and ...   Jun 13 2012, 03:31 AM
- - Baby   4 Votes so far :D Actually, 3 since mine was a nul...   Jun 13 2012, 03:50 AM
- - Daniella   A FARMER WITH HIGH HEELS!? I would pick Toya,...   Jun 13 2012, 03:58 AM
- - Baby   I was trying to give a variety of styles. There...   Jun 13 2012, 04:02 AM
- - Rebecca   Not only is Toya's outfit better, her entire i...   Jun 13 2012, 02:42 PM
- - Baby   I like hearing everyone's thoughts on the desi...   Jun 13 2012, 02:57 PM
- - ZBoy   This is a very clever idea. I'm really lookin...   Jun 13 2012, 06:11 PM
- - Twilight Wanderer   Picked Natsumi because she's the most adorkabl...   Jun 13 2012, 07:58 PM
- - Mizukithepanda   Actually the female protagonist of Welcome to the ...   Jun 13 2012, 08:22 PM
|- - Daniella   QUOTE (Mizukithepanda @ Jun 13 2012, 04:2...   Jun 13 2012, 11:32 PM
- - Noviwan   lol brunettes got no votes odd aint it.   Jun 13 2012, 08:40 PM
- - Twilight Wanderer   QUOTE (Mizukithepanda @ Jun 13 2012, 03:2...   Jun 13 2012, 09:07 PM
- - Mizukithepanda   Yeah, they are and she did. The female protagonist...   Jun 13 2012, 11:45 PM
- - Baby   The MM girl wears short shorts.   Jun 14 2012, 01:27 AM
- - Twilight Wanderer   I never really count shorts as pants. You'r...   Jun 14 2012, 02:20 AM
- - Baby   When I lived on a farm and worked the fields I wou...   Jun 14 2012, 02:36 AM
- - Twilight Wanderer   True, you don't want like... snakes to bite yo...   Jun 14 2012, 02:42 AM
- - Baby   Indeed lol, Nudge nudge. EDIT: Voting is over...   Jun 14 2012, 02:48 AM
- - Daniella   So what happens now is that you have to write a lo...   Jun 17 2012, 01:22 AM
|- - Noviwan   QUOTE (Daniella @ Jun 16 2012, 09:22 PM) ...   Jun 17 2012, 03:08 AM
- - Baby   Working the intro and planning some stuff. N o pro...   Jun 17 2012, 04:45 PM
- - Noviwan   Let us know if you need any input thats what forum...   Jun 18 2012, 01:38 PM
- - Baby   Okay, Thanks Novi. First Part Up   Jun 20 2012, 08:24 AM
- - Baby   Im stupid and need to learn to finish things >_...   Nov 5 2012, 11:10 AM
- - Noviwan   That's fine life come up things we meant to do...   Nov 5 2012, 04:13 PM
- - Baby   I'm going to be working on it between here and...   Nov 5 2012, 07:58 PM


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