I just wrote an adorable little-kids story., enjoy to your inner child's content. |
I just wrote an adorable little-kids story., enjoy to your inner child's content. |
Apr 10 2011, 03:44 AM
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An artist of many sorts Group: Veterans Joined: 16-October 09 |
The girl and her dog Once upon a time, there was a dog who had gotten lost from his family. He got very hungry, but living on the streets had made him look scary, so people were afraid to become friends with him, and wouldn't feed him. One day, the dog was stumbling around, on the verge of starvation, when he met a little girl named Mary. Mary helped the dog get better. She cared for him and fed him until he looked and acted like his old self before he'd gotten lost. He asked her, "Aren't you scared of me like everyone else?" Mary said, "No. I'm blind, and can't see what you look like. But I can tell, just by your voice and what you do that you're a nice dog who just needs a friend." The dog became very attatched to Mary, and wanted to help her like she had helped him. Mary's parents couldn't afford to buy a professionally trained seeing-eye dog, so the dog decided that he would lead Mary wherever she went. Since Mary had just about saved the dog's life, she decided to name him Chance, and they went everywhere together. One day, Mary's parents found a missing dog poster for Chance, and knew that his original owners missed him very much, and decided that the best thing to do was to return him. They brought Mary and Chance to the family, and told them how much the two had become friends and helped each other, and how much the two had changed each other's lives. The family decided to let Mary keep her new friend, and the two grew up together happily ever after. I totally got this idea after watching Dogs101 all day......... |
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Apr 10 2011, 05:11 AM
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Your Friendly Neighborhood Masked Vigilante Group: Veterans Joined: 8-May 10 |
The girl and her dog Once upon a time, there was a dog who had gotten lost from his family. He got very hungry, but living on the streets had made him look scary, so people were afraid to become friends with him, and wouldn't feed him. One day, the dog was stumbling around, on the verge of starvation, when he met a little girl named Mary. Mary helped the dog get better. She cared for him and fed him until he looked and acted like his old self before he'd gotten lost. He asked her, "Aren't you scared of me like everyone else?" Mary said, "No. I'm blind, and can't see what you look like. But I can tell, just by your voice and what you do that you're a nice dog who just needs a friend." The dog became very attatched to Mary, and wanted to help her like she had helped him. Mary's parents couldn't afford to buy a professionally trained seeing-eye dog, so the dog decided that he would lead Mary wherever she went. Since Mary had just about saved the dog's life, she decided to name him Chance, and they went everywhere together. One day, Mary's parents found a missing dog poster for Chance, and knew that his original owners missed him very much, and decided that the best thing to do was to return him. They brought Mary and Chance to the family, and told them how much the two had become friends and helped each other, and how much the two had changed each other's lives. The family decided to let Mary keep her new friend, and the two grew up together happily ever after. I totally got this idea after watching Dogs101 all day......... 1. The dog needs a name. Something simple and easy to say. 2. Your sentences are too long (and complicated) for a picture book. 3. Talking dogs aren't simple enough for little kids... Believe me. 4. What age level are you thinking about? Once upon a time, there was a dog, named *****. He had gotten lost from his family. He was very hungry and looked scary. People were afraid of him and wouldn't feed him. The dog hungrily stumbed around until he met a little blind girl named Mary. Mary helped the dog get better by caring for him and feeding him. Because Mary was his friend, ***** decided that he would be Mary's seeing-eye dog. They went everywhere together. One day, Mary's mom and dad found a missing dog poster for *****. They decided to return him because they knew the family missed him. They brought Mary and ***** to the family. They told them how much the two had become friends and helped each other. The family decided to let Mary keep her new friend, and the two grew up together happily ever after. I edited it a bit, but it's still rough. please let me know what you think. |
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