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 Oct 25 2009, 07:20 PM
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An artist of many sorts Group: Veterans Joined: 16-October 09  |
this is going to be where I post stories that I write. I hope that yall enjoy them. I've finished two stories so far, and just have to type them, so it shouldn't be too long before the first one is up here. and I'll just tell you, (IMG:style_emoticons/default/emot-iia.png)
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Dec 9 2009, 06:42 PM
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Goodnight Group: Ranch Hand Joined: 27-March 08 |
Yeah, fantasy pretty much relies on the strength of your description. Since you are aiming making the reader imagine the same wonderous places, characters and events as you are, it is vital to spend as much time as you can building up the settings to allow the action to fall into place without the reader losing interest or getting confused. You've introduced several imaginary races, for a start, without giving any kind of background or information about what they are. A helpful suggestion is that before you start writing your story proper, you make a kind of glossary for all the places, characters, races, events etc. to help you properly envision what it is you intend to describe to the reader.
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Rebecca Stories by Me Oct 25 2009, 07:20 PM
Saffy What sort of stories are these? I'm curious. Oct 25 2009, 07:24 PM Rebecca I don't write any specific genre... but I main... Oct 25 2009, 07:26 PM mizuko MIZUKO WUVS YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS TOPIC... Oct 25 2009, 08:18 PM Rebecca ......isn't it like, three a.m. where you live... Oct 25 2009, 08:18 PM mizuko Yes it's 7:23 am! And can't wait! ... Oct 25 2009, 08:24 PM Rebecca ok........... it shouldn't be too long if I ca... Oct 25 2009, 08:25 PM mizuko Wheeee! Can't wait! but mizuko should ... Oct 25 2009, 08:42 PM Rebecca .......but...my homework........I must finish my h... Oct 25 2009, 08:44 PM mizuko Alright......NOO MIZUKO HAS TO GET OFF IN 9 MINUTE... Oct 25 2009, 08:52 PM Rebecca .....and I just finished my homework... Oct 25 2009, 08:58 PM mizuko Good because mizuko can stay on for another half a... Oct 25 2009, 08:59 PM Rebecca yayz! but, what is happening that means you ha... Oct 25 2009, 09:01 PM mizuko Yep school! Sucks here it's monday! Be... Oct 25 2009, 09:04 PM Rebecca do you want me to finish the story or not, Mizuko? Oct 25 2009, 09:05 PM mizuko Finish it later! SPAM~~ You know you want to... Oct 25 2009, 09:08 PM Rebecca *throws you a can of spam ham* here ya go! Oct 25 2009, 09:09 PM mizuko Spam....Ham? *Cries* NO how could they spam can... Oct 25 2009, 09:12 PM Rebecca lol. people have actually had contests where they ... Oct 25 2009, 09:15 PM mizuko Okay becca (Is it okay if mizuko calls you that)
... Oct 25 2009, 09:18 PM Rebecca ......thanks, but I'm good. I don't want t... Oct 25 2009, 09:21 PM mizuko Darn it mizuko has to go! We will spam later... Oct 25 2009, 09:22 PM Rebecca ok. you go ahead to school, while I wait to do tha... Oct 25 2009, 09:23 PM Rebecca animals on parade! Oct 25 2009, 09:53 PM Rebecca Since it doesn't look like this is going anywh... Dec 9 2009, 03:22 AM Hasfusel Needs more description and information before you ... Dec 9 2009, 04:34 PM Mizukithepanda Also, I'd take it easy on the dialogue. You us... Dec 9 2009, 06:32 PM Rebecca wow....thanks for the advice, and, this is still k... Dec 12 2009, 03:54 AM
Rebecca Thanks for all the advice on that story. Now I sha... Dec 16 2009, 09:09 PM |
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