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Here you can show off work, and comment on other people's work. It doesn't have to be finished or even started yet.
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Rules:

• Be nice
• Don't Spam
• If your fanfic has cursing please put these ( *** ) in its spot.
• Keep it PG-13
• State the anime. game. book, ecetera that its from
• fill out form for each story (at the bottom of the page) so we won't have an overflowing of stories and I can keep track of them all and their 'chapters'
• their will be a "member list" or "author list"
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FanFictions:

• Bound By Biometal
Chapters: 11 Complete
• Rikku's Story
Chapters: 12 Complete
• That's Just life for you
Chapters: still being worked on
• Hopelessly in Love
Chapters: still being worked on
•Hidden Memories
Chapters: 6
•Charity Case
Chapters: Complete
•Another High School Love Story
Chapters: Still being worked on
•Brooke's Tale
Chapters: 9 Complete
•Lost without You
Chapters: Still being worked on
•Orange Blossoms
Chapters: Still being worked on
•Kasey and the Witch
Chapters: Still being worked on
• Fear
Chapters: Complete
•Big Yellow Taxi
Chapters: 1
• Courage
Chapters: 1
•A Pirate's Bounty
Chapters: Still being worked On
•Warm Glow:
Chapters: Complete
•You Were There For Me
Chapters: 10 Complete
•You and Me:
Chapters: Incomplete
•Picture in Picture
Chapters: Complete
Authors:

• Lenyo
• Be Happy!
• ShowChoirGirl
• Furby
•Twilight Wonderer
•Marley
•Hisa Misa
•Zen Clarke
•.Fran.
•Indigo Horrible

Links:

•Lenyo's Bound by Biometall
•Happy's Rikku's Story
•ShowChoirGirl's That's Just the Life for You
•Furby's Hopelessly In Love
•Twilight Wanderer's Hidden Memories
•Marley's Charity Case
•Hisa Misa's Another High School Love Story
•Be Happy's! Brooke's Tale
•ShowChoirGirl and Be Happy!'s Lost Without You
• Marley and ShowChoirGirl's Orange Blossoms
• Marley's Kasey and The Witch
• Happy's Fear
• Zen's Big Yellow Taxi
•Zen's Courage
•Happy's A Fight Inside
•Fran's A Pirate's Bounty
•Zen Clarke'sWarm Glow
•Be Happy's You Were There For Me
•Be Happy's You and Me
•Indigo Horrible's Picture in Picture

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[Twilight Wandere...]

I thought it was pretty good. Just try not to change between first and third person, and make your grammar nice and easy to read. :)

Thanks Be_Happy!

Chapter Four:
"Before I...fell off the cliff?" Raguna repeated in a questioning voice. Kross put his hand to his chin and mumbled "S***, I promised Stella I wouldn't say a thing...Oh well, come inside with me, and I'll explain it all to you..." He took Raguna by the hand and led him into the church. Once he got to a pew, he sat down and set Raguna on his lap and laced his arms around Raguna's body. Raguna noticed one thing, and one thing only. Kross was stone cold, like a beautiful corpse that was cursed to live. "Kross...why are you so cold?" Raguna asked innocently. Kross smiled softly and said "It grew cold of it's own accord when I thought you had died, my lover. Now to explain." He began explaining that he, Raguna, and Brodik had lived in a small refuge town away from a war. He told him that Raguna had hated it there, so he tried running away. Since the town thought that Raguna was important, they had chased him out of town, trying to get him back. It was then that Raguna had fallen from a cliff and into the ocean, hitting his head on the rocks on the way down. As Raguna was walking home in the dark, he went over these things in his mind. These made sense, but why was Brodik so harsh to him? Raguna didn't have time to dwell on that, as a sack was thrown on him from behind and he was lifted up unto someone's shoulder. "If you won't come with me, then I'll just drag you back." The voice said. That was all Raguna heard before he was knocked out.

Lol. That's probably it till tomorrow.