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Tragedy hm tot lovestory by hmbabe
Felicia:"My name is Felicia" Luke:"Hi im Luke" Felicia:"Cool hair" I said to him blushing, Luke:"oh thanks I guess see ya I have to go on a date with Kathy" Why are men are just so subtle and I thought he likked me wow I felt dumb so we said our good byes and left, Kathy shes not to bright I thought well then again nither was luke I guess I should be happy for him besides if hes happy im happy oh what am I kidding im in love so I went home and changed into my maids gown that was totally hawt I was going to the bar not for the drinking but for the boys duh I couldnt wait maybe that was where luke was having the date sure enough luke was there but apparently kathy was mad at luke for playing the video games she was steaming red she was so mad she went up to owen and made out with him luke watched the whole thing he looked dizzy but when he saw me he fainted I ran over to him but this dancer girl ran up to him and gave him cpr before I could reach him I was so mad I stomped up to her and demanded an explanation instead she just woke up luke and tounged him that was ch 1 hope u like post ur fanfics here too I looked so hurt duke could tell and he cant notice anything so he came over and tried to set me up with toby ughhh then owen ughhh then calvin ughh then gill no way then julious yes finally duke has some taste julious looked at me with his cold eyes I looked away when I looked back he was gone wow that was fast so I went into the woods to look for him Felicia:"julious where are you" all of the sudden pack of wild dogs ran up to me snarling so I screamed naturally in a blink of an eye juli Thats my nickname I gave him was ther Juli:"what are u doing here" he screamed into my ear Felicia:"I I I uh was just llooking fofor yoou" I stammered barely getting it out , then again he gave me the cold stare that made me want to jump off a cliff one of the wilddogs lunged at me and everything went black the next morning I woke up I was in the hospital Felicia:"whwhat happened" I felt really dizzy and there was something that stung on my head I looked into the mirror and saw stitches Felicia:"great" I said sarcastically the in a split second I saw juli Felicia:"how do u do that" I asked Juli:"do what" he said confused Felicia:"u know where your not in here but then when I blink my eyes your back" Juli:"we will never speak of this again" he growled at me. Felicia:"ookay" I said suspiciously. Juli:"I brought you flowers" he choked out. Felicia:"thanks" I said blushing. Juli:"um bye" Felicia:"do you have to go" of course he was already gone that was ch 2 please comment or post ur fanfics here Felicia: I sat in the hospital bed reading farming weekly "wow I didnt know you can grow turnips in ponds" Juli:what was that Felicia:how long have you been here Juli:just two hours but ive only been in here two minutes Felicia:what do u need Juli:excuse me Felicia:I mean what do u want from me Juli: I cant just stop by to say hi Felicia:really Juli Juli:okay I wanted to apologize Felicia:for what Juli:fighting zombies what do u think Felicia:really I dont know Juli:so u were unconscious oh its nothing Felicia:please tell me Juli:fine I blah balh Felicia:what Juli:I dropped you on your head on the way over here Felicia:you did so ur not strong Juli:no I am I just did it purposely Felicia:what am I going to do with you Juli:throw me in a toxic waste dump That was ch3 hoped you liked it |
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Melted Wings of Wax Group: Global Moderators ![]() Joined: 22-January 08 ![]() |
Mmm. Love your fanfic Showchoirgirl. You stopped off in a good place, which I think is always the hardest part. :)
(Nother note. Please, feel free to correct me. I promise I won't yell at you, since Twi's way of writing is literally coming up with it on the spot, as she's not the type to write something over a long period of time. >.>) Chapter 2: Not a woman?! The purple haired woman moved closer and knelt down next to me. "Oh my, you are hurt. What is your name~?" She asked, as she pulled a wrap bandage out of her bag. I took note of the few metals and stones she had in there as well when she closed it. "Now where does it hurt~?" I was too absorbed in this woman to really answer her question. "Ma'am, what is your name?" I asked her. I could see something snap in her face as she said cooly. "My name is Julius." I pointed to my ankle and he started to wrap it. "Ah. I'm so sorry sir. But now that you mention it...only a man would wear those boots, and not very many female clothing line's make coattails..." He had finished wrapping my ankle and started to stare at me, as if he was deciding what to do with me. As he did that I felt the bile rise in my throat like it had done so many times before. I got up and stumbled behind a tree. "Why did it have to be now?" I thought to myself, when the blood rose from my throat and landed all over the ground. Mr. Julius could hear me retching, and he probably wondered what I was doing. I felt a hand on my back moving up and down and he said "Oh, you poor thing. We should take you home." He picked me up bridal style and carried me home. Of course, right as soon as Fressia got back that is. She screamed out "Young Mistress! Julius, go ahead and place her on her feet." He did so and Fressia started to probe him, just like every other person I had dared to approach. "How did you know where she lived?" She asked him sternly. He started to stammer out "U-uh...I...u-uh...Hey, look at that, I gotta go. Seeya Melodi." With that he ran off. And it was when he did that I realized. I had not once told him my name. (What you are about to see is Julius' perspective.) I ran back to the Town Hall building and heaved all my weight against the door. Whom I was looking for wasn't there though. Mayor Hamilton pointed to the second floor, and I ran up the stairs to the library. Gill was watching from a window, and once I came in he pulled back into his seat. "Did you see that? She found out!" Gill rolled his eyes as me, just like he always did, saying that this situation could be fixed as easy as snapping your fingers. Heh, stupid rich boy. "You just need to progress on your stalking skills and exscuses. Remember, the stalker does not approach the stalkee unless she is unable to fend off fanboys." He flipped a page in his book and spoke the last part. "Remember, if it doesn't work out, you are free to rent my basement from me." (Comment if you like. That last part was cuz I saw the chance and I always thought Gill was a stalker. :P) |
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