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hmbabe
post Mar 27 2009, 10:18 PM
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Tragedy hm tot lovestory by hmbabe

Felicia:"My name is Felicia"

Luke:"Hi im Luke"

Felicia:"Cool hair" I said to him blushing,

Luke:"oh thanks I guess see ya I have to go on a date with Kathy"

Why are men are just so subtle and I thought he likked me wow I felt dumb so we said our good byes and left, Kathy shes not to bright I thought well then again nither was luke I guess I should be happy for him besides if hes happy im happy oh what am I kidding im in love so I went home and changed into my maids gown that was totally hawt I was going to the bar not for the drinking but for the boys duh I couldnt wait maybe that was where luke was having the date sure enough luke was there but apparently kathy was mad at luke for playing the video games she was steaming red she was so mad she went up to owen and made out with him luke watched the whole thing he looked dizzy but when he saw me he fainted I ran over to him but this dancer girl ran up to him and gave him cpr before I could reach him I was so mad I stomped up to her and demanded an explanation instead she just woke up luke and tounged him

that was ch 1 hope u like post ur fanfics here too

I looked so hurt duke could tell and he cant notice anything so he came over and tried to set me up with toby ughhh then owen ughhh then calvin ughh then gill no way then julious yes finally duke has some taste julious looked at me with his cold eyes I looked away when I looked back he was gone wow that was fast so I went into the woods to look for him

Felicia:"julious where are you"

all of the sudden pack of wild dogs ran up to me snarling so I screamed naturally in a blink of an eye juli Thats my nickname I gave him was ther

Juli:"what are u doing here" he screamed into my ear

Felicia:"I I I uh was just llooking fofor yoou" I stammered barely getting it out , then again he gave me the cold stare that made me want to jump off a cliff one of the wilddogs lunged at me and everything went black the next morning I woke up I was in the hospital

Felicia:"whwhat happened" I felt really dizzy and there was something that stung on my head I looked into the mirror and saw stitches

Felicia:"great" I said sarcastically the in a split second I saw juli

Felicia:"how do u do that" I asked

Juli:"do what" he said confused

Felicia:"u know where your not in here but then when I blink my eyes your back"

Juli:"we will never speak of this again" he growled at me.

Felicia:"ookay" I said suspiciously.

Juli:"I brought you flowers" he choked out.

Felicia:"thanks" I said blushing.

Juli:"um bye"

Felicia:"do you have to go" of course he was already gone

that was ch 2 please comment or post ur fanfics here

Felicia: I sat in the hospital bed reading farming weekly "wow I didnt know you can grow turnips in ponds"

Juli:what was that

Felicia:how long have you been here

Juli:just two hours but ive only been in here two minutes

Felicia:what do u need

Juli:excuse me

Felicia:I mean what do u want from me

Juli: I cant just stop by to say hi

Felicia:really Juli

Juli:okay I wanted to apologize

Felicia:for what

Juli:fighting zombies what do u think

Felicia:really I dont know

Juli:so u were unconscious oh its nothing

Felicia:please tell me

Juli:fine I blah balh

Felicia:what

Juli:I dropped you on your head on the way over here

Felicia:you did so ur not strong

Juli:no I am I just did it purposely

Felicia:what am I going to do with you

Juli:throw me in a toxic waste dump

That was ch3 hoped you liked it
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Gabstah
post Mar 28 2009, 11:00 PM
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Maybe you should try formatting it correctly? It would make it much easier to read.
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