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post Nov 22 2008, 04:10 AM
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HEY! HEY! WHAT HAPPENING TO ME?!? MOM!! as I woke from sweat and blood I ran to my mother room to cry into her shoulder to tell her my dream but all she could say it just a phase sweetie. it will pass... it will pass...

chapter one~why

As I stare into the moon to change from vampire to werewolf I thought to myslef that night my parents told me that I was a vampire/werewolf I never belived them but now I reget that day because I get sick of that replaying in side my head....suddley I heard a branch crack I turn in defense. O it just you Scott... Hey! Quiency do u want to wait with me until we phase and start are rempage? whatever I dont care beside were going to fight each etheir like we do every night. that true... as we sat there and began with the pains of turning into a werewolf I suddly had this earge to kill someone but not anyone but my mother! I never had that feeling before?!? I tryed to get it out of me before it to late.But it was to late I began to run...

chapter two>unknown
As I running trying to stop myslef I thought to my self how come I want to kill her if she didnt do anything wrong to me... or did she as I was wondering this scott was chaseing afther me runing like a crazy man trying to kill me like always but never succeds in it right when he was about to attack me he jumped around andx stood there staring wardeing as soon as that happen I ran into my house head on tripping o n ewverything then I fianlly stop in front of my dead father and mother bodys just lifeles and cold.....
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Hasfusel
post Nov 24 2008, 06:05 PM
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