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[Aki-Chan]

I'm just going to put some short stories, songs, and poems I've written in here. I would really like opinions, and don't worry I don't mind constructive criticism.

I'll start off with a short(really short) story that I wrote last year, it is a pure comedy that was written out of boredom, and it's called-

The Sleep & Brained Deprived

In a normal park on a normal day two friends sat on a normal bench.
"I'm bored!" whined a boy with brown short hair, Brown eyes, Wearing a black baggy T-shirt and a pair of dark blue jeans.
"You’re always bored Jake." Said another boy uninterested, this boy had black hair, Brown eyes and was wearing a white shirt with a green clover on it, A ring with the letter R in graven on it, and tan pants.
"But Ryan today I'm even boreder the normal!" The boy called Jake shouted.
"Yeah that's nice. Oh and it's more bored not boreder." Said the other boy Ryan who seemed like he would rather be sleeping then talking.
"You’re so heartless! I'm going to stop being your friend if you don't do something to entertain me." Warned Jake wagging his finger in Ryan's face.
"Alright I'll do something."
"Really what?!"
"Come closer." Ryan said a smirk growing on his face as Jake did exactly as he told him.
"Okay do it." Jake said eagerly.
"I did."
"What? What do you mean you did?"
Leaning back against the bench Ryan explained "Well for that short while you were entertained."
"...Sometimes I really...Don't like you that much." Said Jake pouting.
"Yeah... Can I go home now?"
"No! As my friend you must suffer with me!"
"Your sooo caring" Ryan said sarcastically.
"Yes I am." Jake agreed smiling, completely missing the sarcasm.
"So what do we do now." Ryan asked after rolling his eyes at his friend’s stupidity.
"...I don't know. What do you want to do?"
"Sleep."
"Why are you so tired anyway?"
"Because it's 4:00 in the morning!"
Jake made no reply to this.
"Well don't you have anything to say?" Ryan asked.
After a moment of deep thought Jake replied "So that's why no one's here!"
"You sugar high moron!" Ryan yelled upset by his friend’s lack of common sense.

End

I'll probably post more tomorrow. "Probably" being the key word.

[Aki-Chan]

Here are two poems I randomly wrote today.

Gone

When I came home they were yelling,
once I saw I couldn't stop staring.

They didn't seem to be in love,
not when they pushed, not when they shoved.

Now Dad's real mad, he grabbed his keys,
then out the door he made his leave.

Why is Mommy crying so much?
Don't worry he'll be back for lunch!

But Daddy still has not come back,
I wonder where he could be at...

Hey Daddy am I really that bad?
Is that why you are still so mad?

One month, two months, soon many years.
Still they haven't dried, our many tears.

End

I just felt like writing something about a little boy going through a tragedy, and poof! This was born.

Change

I have never been that good a man,
there are many things that I regret.
But I can change myself, I know I can.
I'll become the man I need to be.

This is the promise I made that day,
as I looked down at my baby girl.
But I need help, so I'll kneel and pray,
begging you for the courage I lack.

To protect her heart, to make her smile,
I'll do whatever you want me to.
Help me change my current life style!
Only you can hear my silent plea...

End

I don't really know where this came from, but it makes me want to listen to "The Reason" - By Hoobastank.

Anyways, I hope you guys like them.